A.R.O.Y.H skits #1

As Rarity sat down by the fire, Surn was making some Hearth's warming eve treats for the two of them. Although he never understood what Hearth's warming was, he still enjoyed the spirit it brought.

Surn! How are those cookies comeing along?

Surn walks over to Rarity and gives her a hug. They are in the oven right now. We just got to wait. Surn said.

Well then, what do you wanna do? Rarity asked.

Well.... we can just do nothing,

We can just snuggle you know.

Surn rested his head on Rarity's shoulder. Actually, I was hoping I can sleep on you. Surn said.

Rarity smiled as she put her head on top of Surn. Sure thing Surn. Sure thing.

End.

Comments

[The_Darker_Fonts]

While the concept is interesting and rather lovely, you aren't allowed to write stories in a theatrical or cinematic format. Maybe try integrating more of the solidified story structure in. Also note that highlighting the character dialogue is a rather interesting way to signify someone's speaking. Probably would be better to add the quotation marks. Keep the highlight, as that's a rather sturdy way to keep readers on track of the characters.

[Leafy]

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Oh. Uh.... okay?

[The_Darker_Fonts]

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Yeah, sorry. The rules don't allow it. I really wanted to write a theatrical little story on here about Pip, Snips, and Snails. Unfortunately, I saw the rules.

[Leafy]

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Ah... I see.