Chapter Four | Thoughts and Personal Notes · 5:25am Sep 12th, 2020
Howdy Folks!
Wow. My longest chapter is finally out! I really hope you folks like it. For me personally this chapter was a blast to write because it's the first chapter that dips more into the Metro universe. Hopefully, I'm paying enough respects to both stories but only time will tell. The next chapter should be done in roughly two weeks if college allows me. So stay tuned.
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Author's Notes:
Let me a little frank with you guys. I. Hate. Sea Mist. She's a important character and I love her character. But writing a physic is really hard seeing as she can literally see the future.
But I had a real fun time creating the pony version of the Children of the Forest from Metro Exodus. I really wanted to make this the town that shows a stark difference between where we're going and where we came from. Also the Master. My sweet killer bear. It was hard, to say the least, to write a bear into this chapter because the only ones that exists are Star Spawns! But in the end it all worked out.
Also while on the topic of characters. I felt need to beat up Wildcard a lot more, because, as the writer, I felt like he's getting a little too Gary Sue so I thought it's time for a punch to the face. Or a huge claw to knock him over a cliff.
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What was your guys' thoughts on the chapter? Tell me! I'd love to hear them!
