OC Backstories

So, I've made lots of OCs, and I decided to start writing down backstories for some of them. Here's the ones I've written for my Star Wars OCs. Let me know if you think any of them should appear in any of the stories and if so, which class

Darth Severus

Caelan, now known as Darth Severus, was born to a slave family on Balmorra. Like Anakin Skywalker, he had no father and was born purely of the Force. Unfortunately for the Jedi and Republic, Balmorra is an Imperial controlled planet, and at the age of 17, the Sith discovered him and sent him to Korriban for training to become Sith himself. After many trials, all of which he passed without much effort, he became the apprentice of Darth Makona, a member of the New Sith Empire's Dark Council. Under her tutelage, he became very powerful in an abnormally short period of time. Because of this, Makona grew worried that her apprentice would betray her. However, she gave him the benefit of the doubt and promoted him to a Lord, more specifically, Lord Cinaratus. As a lord, he studied dark secrets and created a ritual that allowed him to concentrate Dark side energy into a small orb and consume it, furthering his power. This ritual earned him the title of Force Eater, and he was seen as an elite among the Sith. When the Second Galactic Civil War broke out, he returned to Korriban to receive his own apprentice. After completing her trials, a Jawa named Nefel Q'oqikth became his new apprentice. Despite the fact she was a Jawa, Caelan grew fond of his new apprentice. During the war, Darth Makona was killed in combat, and Caelan was promoted to Darth Severus and took her place on the Dark Council.

Lord Krayt

Nefel Q'oqikth was a Jawa who was born off Tatooine. Her parents were bounty hunters during the Second Galactic Civil War, but her clan was enslaved on the Imperial controlled world of Taris. While in slavery, her talent in the Force, which Jawas thought was simply magic, as they were uneducated in the Force, attracted the attention of the Sith, and Imperial Law says that all Force-sensitives on Imperial controlled planets must be trained to become Sith. At first, she didn't particularly like being Sith, but considering the fact she was given freedom, she didn't complain. As an acolyte on Korriban, she created her own lightsaber from bits and pieces of scrap she found in the tombs during her trial. Her strength, skill, and sheer determination attracted the attention of Lord Cinaratus, the future Darth Severus. He had come to Korriban to receive his own apprentice, and due to his patience running thin with the overseer constantly sending the acolytes on new trials, he demanded that their final trial be a battle royal, that the remaining acolytes would fight to the death and the victor would be his apprentice. Nefel proved to be the most powerful acolyte in the battle, scratching the eyes of her enemies out before torturing them with lightning, and finally decapitating them. Her brutality earned her much respect from Cinaratas. While under the tutelage of her master, she learned more about what her clan called magic, the Force. When her master was promoted to Darth Severus, she was given a task to prove if she was worthy of being promoted to Lord. Her trial was to slay a Krayt Dragon on Tatooine and bring its pearl to her master as proof. Though she was quickly swallowed whole by the dragon, she was able to use the Force to protect her from the dragon's stomach acid and cut her way out with her lightsaber. Darth Severus was pleased that his apprentice survived the task and named her Lord Krayt for her victory over one of the most dangerous predators on Tatooine.

Unaku

Unaku was born on his species’ homeworld of Hoth. However, he seemed to have some sort of mutation that made him even more aggressive than a normal Wampa, attacking anyone and anything that stood in his path, even other Wampas. When a group of Mandalorians was hunting on Hoth, they encountered the mutant Wampa, and ever since, Mandalorians had been putting in credits on a bet, whoever could slay the mutant Wampa would win all the credits that had been anteed up. For five years, those credits had continued to grow, as nobody was able to defeat the Wampa. A Sith Lord named Lord Krayt, the former apprentice to the Dark Council member Darth Severus, heard that her bounty hunter parents had anteed credits into the pot, and decided to honor them by participating. While she was not a Mandalorian, Mandalore the Undying allowed her to participate out of respect for her parents. When the Sith Lord met the Wampa, she could sense powerful Dark side energy coming from him, and instead of killing him and taking the bounty, she was able to subdue the creature and dominate it into joining the Sith Order. While at the Sith Academy, Unaku was avoided by acolytes, and even some Sith Lords were worried he would go on a rampage if they got in his way. After his trials were complete, he became Lord Krayt's apprentice

FHK-01

FHK-01 was a prototype model for the unique FHK series. What was so unique about it is that the FHK droids, short for Force Hunter Killer droids, were designed to be Force-sensitive. It is unknown how the designer, who remained anonymous, created such a design. Secretly, the designer of the FHK series was Darth Severus, a Sith who was on the Sith Empire's Dark Council. Severus experimented further with the ritual that gained him the title Force Eater and was able to replicate Force-sensitivity on a mechanical level and installed the program into the FHK prototype. The prototype was fairly successful but still had flaws. The main flaw is that it was unable to differentiate the Light Side from the Dark Side. This issue was fixed in later models. The FHK series was considered to be the ultimate assassin droid, and both Sith, Jedi, and even high-class civilians employed them as assassins or bodyguards.

Mandalore the Undying

Ruxi Ordo, now known as Mandalore the Undying, was a Rattataki bounty hunter from humble beginnings. While he appears to be in his mid-20s, he is actually 85 years old, because of a rare genetic condition that prevents his body from physically aging. He got his start as a gun for hire, who was mostly hired by Atara the Hutt. However, Atara saw promise in him and was able to get him initiated into the Ordo Mandalorian Clan. As he worked his way up the ranks in the clan, he was known for his unusual methods of hunting. He became famous for strangling the Wampa on Hoth with his bare hands. When the Second Galactic Civil War broke out, he was the head of the Ordo Clan, and chose to defy the New Sith Empire, but did not bend to the New Republic either. His claim of Ordo's neutrality was seen as a cowardly act by Zayakar Fett, the leader of the Fett Clan, one of the most influential of the Clans. Ruxi offered a meeting with Zayakar, wanting to talk things over and explain why he wanted to remain neutral. This meeting was in reality a trap. Ruxi demanded an apology for calling him a coward, and when Zayakar drew her blaster, Ruxi quickly snapped her neck and took her helmet as a trophy and proof that he had killed her. The Fett Clan soon called Ruxi their leader, and many other clans grew to respect Ruxi for taking down Zayakar Fett. When Mandalore was killed during the war, the Mandalorian Clans agreed that Ruxi was worthy of the title of Mandalore. Because of his genetic condition, he took the title "Mandalore the Undying" and pulled the Mandalorian clans out of the Second Galactic Civil War in order to hold a hunting competition between the clans. During the war, he was known for his stubbornness on the subject of neutrality, but he allowed the clans to accept jobs from both sides as long as the target was considered worthy of Mandalorian intervention, and if they were not considered worthy, the Mandalorians would pass if over to common bounty hunters. Ruxi eventually did join the war, but the Mandalorians were not fighting for the Republic or the Empire, they fought to become their own political organization, The Hunter's Ministry, a government where Mandalorians were above all and ruled peacefully and honorably. As Mandalore, he created the Mandalorian Council, where he was the first among equals, along with eleven other members, who were all high-ranking Mandalorians. As the war continued, it was obvious to both the Republic and Empire that the Hunter's Ministry was a force to be reckoned with, and both made attempts to negotiate with the Council, to no avail.