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A French brony who loves to read and write. My English is not perfect, but I will do my best!

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  • 4 weeks
    TV Tropes Page Apple Bloom's Mansion

    Someone made a TV Tropes page about the Apple Bloom's Mansion saga.

    Link.

    I made quite the number of tropes without knowing, lol.

    1 comments · 52 views
  • 7 weeks
    Subspace Army Tree Before Chapter 168

    Here is the tree showing the officers' ranks in the Subspace Army before chapter 168. I advise to read the chapter first before seeing the image.

    0 comments · 92 views
  • 8 weeks
    "New" Story and New Group

    I'm starting to write a new story, or not really. It will actually be a compilation of stories in the universe of UME. Tales From The Omniverse. More than a compilation, this is a group made by Cyrus Colter there. In this group, people will be able to post their Tales happening in UME's universes.

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    5 comments · 153 views
  • 11 weeks
    Sizes Precision

    With A Sweetie Dream Land's rewriting, I have changed some sizes.

    As of the starts of A Sweetie Dream Land, Kirby was 20cm tall. A Waddle Dee is about 30cm, Dedede, about one meter, Meta Knight, over 30cm (maybe 35cm, not sure yet), and Sweetie Void, about 50cm.

    By the time of The Forgotten Land, Kirby is 30cm tall, and Sweetie is about 60cm.

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  • 11 weeks
    Rewriting A Sweetie Dreamland

    I'm going to start to rewrite A Sweetie Dreamland, essentially to change the verb tenses. I'm also going to change "Dreamland" to "Dream Land", maybe change a few lines here and there, and so on. I don't know how long it will take, but I think that I should be done before the end of February.

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Jul
7th
2020

Give your Psychopath(s) · 2:06pm Jul 7th, 2020

Alright everybody, I'm starting the VIP Wing, so let's see how good you are at imagining the worst scums on earth. The biggest bas***** that you can think of, who would deserve to share a banquet with Satan himself, give them to me. They can be of any profession and of any species known in the ponyworld. A security guard disguising as a mascot to lure children into a backroom and kill them (I'm looking at you, Purple Guy), a merciless warlord, the boss of a group of brigands that killed countless of beings, a greedy businessman not hesitating to become dirty to get a few more bits... Go crazy!

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A pony with an obsession with swords.

Some sort of mad bomber type. Bonus points if tricking them into blowing themselves up is part of the fight.

A kirin photographer who's gone insane cause he saw the horrors of war and now has a thing for captyring images of the moment someone is dying.

Kinda like Stefano from The Evil Within 2

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It starts well. I especially love the camerakirin. Remember, you aren't forced to just give one proposition each. If you have, like, three psychos in mind, then give the three. The more the better.

A blood mage that boils his victims blood while using magic to keep them alive, then eating them

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Alrighty. Give me a moment

you better actually use purple guy, but anyways...
1. Chara but as an earth pony.
2. Janson from maze runner the death cure.(you can choose what creature he is.)
3. Chrisalis's great grandma.(pretty racist and insane.)
4. Jeane Elizabith Newmaker. (a horrible person.)

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So far, just one.

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oh, and make sure chara has a SH** TON of knives.

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:twilightoops: Wow, that's... Wow... You mean, he cooks his victims with their own blood while keeping them alive? Then eats them while they're still alive? That's so deliciously messed up, I take it!
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So:
-A child megalomaniac
-I haven't read the book and I don't remember much of the movie, so I don't know much about this character.
-A female Hitler.
-Who?

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jeane newmaker:
a horible woman who adopted an orphan, and forced her to go through a 70 minute attatchment therapy session, which suffocated her, and killed her.

yeah.

A pony mare that has an eye obssession and would put them on her dolls. Doll maker with a mental illness. Lost her little sister and the last thing she remembered about her little sister were her beautiful eyes. Owns a shop called 'The Doll House'.
She can't help for what she has turned into.

A changeling student who at first glance looks like the most friendliest and harmless person in the world but deep down is just a psycho who would murder you with a smile still on his face. Had childhood problems

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Mmh... From what I just read about her, while she did something horrible, the real monsters seemed to be the therapists who forced the child to remain in the sheet despite everything. I'm not sure, however, if I will be able to include any of them because, one, none of them is dead as far as I know, and two, they aren't expressly evil, just misplaced.
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Nice for the doll maker.
I may need to change the species of the changeling student. In Apple Bloom's Mansion, the events haven't reached yet the season six final, so changelings are still under Chrysalis' rule.

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Is cool though the changeling is a ghost and can shapeshift into other creatures and maybe once upon a time the residents made an exception

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Here is another one. A Discoridian worshipper that believes the world should be thrown into chaos and was touched by Discord cause he wanted to see how this played out and well he was bored. Basically a psycho priest

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Well, ponies never heard of changelings before the invasion, so if there was a changeling student, then the changeling was disguised as a pony from beginning to end. This can work, I will just have to imagine some more background for him. Why he became a student for exemple.

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So, what if Pinkie was a Discordian worshipper, basically? I suppose that I can work with this.

decaying, falling apart unicorn who keeps himself alive using the darkest magic he could find. based off of the pokemon creepypasta buried alive.

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So, basically some kind of living lich. Alright.

my idea for a miniboss: a mesh of screaming, horrible souls all clawing at the air, in the shape of a plant bulb. drags things towards it using grotesque vines made of a mix of decaying flesh, ectoplasm, and satanic artifacts.

to defeat it, you have to suck up the vines, unfurling the 'petals' of the 'flower' until all of the ghosts are released into the room.

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A nurse that wants to give foals "peace".

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Such a thing would either be encountered in the laboratory or in the graveyard.

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How bout a unicorn that eats other unicorn’s brains to gain magical power

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Classic. I take it.

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That's some serious psycho there, perfect.

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An assassin that had his Pegasus feathers replaced with feather knives

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*Takes note* Alright... Alright...

not really vip character suggestions, just some enemy ideas:
a spirit so corrupted it can hardly be called that anymore.
a mix between a wall and a white blob with an eye.
a sort of ectoplasm hermitcrab bomb fusion that appears in the lab.
a white blinding spirit that leads you into traps.
a sign with an eye that teleports and, when caught, pops out of the poultergheist and gives you a colectible.
possesed stuff, like kitchen supplies, shovels, and even food!

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There are so many ideas here.

A mother who lost her children. Started kidnapping children to keep them for her own and will do anything necessary to keep them with her even if it means breaking them.

Call her 'The Widow'

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There are some that I don't think I will be able to use, but there are good ideas.
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Again a good idea. you're really good!

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It made me realize how messed up we are even though we don't do such things

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Yeah. :rainbowlaugh: Probably read too much manga, played too much videogames, or watched too much the news.

Sonic.exe but as a unicorn. His specialty is casting illusions that come to life when the victim is fooled into believing the illusions are real. If that somehow doesn't work, he won't hesitate to kill his victims directly. Oh, and he loves teleporting and jumpscares.

The Luminary from Dragon Quest XI, but as a unicorn. He used to be good, but after being betrayed by the king of Heliodor, he was corrupted by his own rage and started killing every monster in his path. His rampage was brought to an end by a Black Dragon who turned the Luminary into a snack. As a ghost, he considers every living and non-living thing in his path to be useful only for level grinding.

The Doom Slayer as an earth pony. After becoming a ghost, he is led by the false belief that every creature is a demon whom he must slay.

And now for my own original idea: Final Sonata, a singer who kills her victims with her songs... Perish Songs, if you will.

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Uh. I will have to go look more about the Luminary. I haven't played Dragon Quest XI. All of them are good idea and promise some good fights.

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Oh, the Luminary is the character you play as in the game. If you want to learn more about the Luminary, why don't you ask MeeM? He told me that he beat the final boss of Dragon Quest XI and is currently playing Dragon Quest VIII, so I would think he knows a lot about Dragon Quest and the Luminary.

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I was planning to watch a let's play for the sequel of A Sweetie Dreamland. I think I will avoid spoiles until then.

The terror mask from slaughter fest video game

the unused Luigi's mansion 1 monster elh. you could give it your own backstory!

the unused monster elh. you can give it a backstory.

tortured spirit of a child that cant deal damage on it's own, so instead it conjures up demented, warped rooms with enemies in them to impede apple bloom's path.

seriously, purple guy better be there.

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Like, the mask from Splatterhouse?
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The only background that I can give to that thing would be "Creation of Thanatos". It's just too unnatural to have any other background.
And nice idea with the child.

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burnt white mannequin with black broken holes where the eyes are supposed to be. the back half is broken off and is only connected by a tendril of black void. only moves when looking away and can only be hurt by grabbing an object with the poultergust and shooting it at the black goop in the middle. eventually, the goop snaps and evaporates.

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Cool, but it wouldn't work. I mean, if Apple Bloom was alone, it would work, but there, they're five. To put it simply, one of them would constantly look at it, forcing it to not move, and the four others use this to attack it from all sides. It would be destroyed in ten seconds without it doing anything threatening.

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Yes from splatterhouse

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Totally taking it. But I will have to put it somewhere else than in the VIP Wing.

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Wow this is still going?

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Until I have finished the VIP wing. I just finished the first floor (that you can see there), and I think I have enough material to do a good part of the second floor, if not all of it.

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Welp I wish Applebloom luck and I'm looking forward to reading future chapters:scootangel:

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