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Lucar


A French brony who loves to read and write. My English is not perfect, but I will do my best!

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  • 5 weeks
    TV Tropes Page Apple Bloom's Mansion

    Someone made a TV Tropes page about the Apple Bloom's Mansion saga.

    Link.

    I made quite the number of tropes without knowing, lol.

    1 comments · 54 views
  • 8 weeks
    Subspace Army Tree Before Chapter 168

    Here is the tree showing the officers' ranks in the Subspace Army before chapter 168. I advise to read the chapter first before seeing the image.

    0 comments · 96 views
  • 9 weeks
    "New" Story and New Group

    I'm starting to write a new story, or not really. It will actually be a compilation of stories in the universe of UME. Tales From The Omniverse. More than a compilation, this is a group made by Cyrus Colter there. In this group, people will be able to post their Tales happening in UME's universes.

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    5 comments · 156 views
  • 11 weeks
    Sizes Precision

    With A Sweetie Dream Land's rewriting, I have changed some sizes.

    As of the starts of A Sweetie Dream Land, Kirby was 20cm tall. A Waddle Dee is about 30cm, Dedede, about one meter, Meta Knight, over 30cm (maybe 35cm, not sure yet), and Sweetie Void, about 50cm.

    By the time of The Forgotten Land, Kirby is 30cm tall, and Sweetie is about 60cm.

    0 comments · 140 views
  • 12 weeks
    Rewriting A Sweetie Dreamland

    I'm going to start to rewrite A Sweetie Dreamland, essentially to change the verb tenses. I'm also going to change "Dreamland" to "Dream Land", maybe change a few lines here and there, and so on. I don't know how long it will take, but I think that I should be done before the end of February.

    1 comments · 142 views
Jul
3rd
2020

Seeing Things a Little Bigger · 5:47pm Jul 3rd, 2020

Remember when I said that I wanted Thanatos' castle to have over one hundred rooms? Well, I just went to study the plans of Castle of Versailles, and I understood that I was really seeing things small. The Castle Of Versailles has about 2300 rooms! In comparison, Thanatos' castle would have looked more like a big manor with some towers. So much for the castle of Death.

So, now I'm planning to put AT LEAST 1000 rooms in the castle. This means more rooms, but also more boss ghosts to imagine to fill them, and so, that the next Apple Bloom's Mansion will take even more time to come out.

The castle will have:
-4 floors
-1 basement level
-At least a dozen towers of various sizes
-I don't know yet how many wings (the main wing with the throne room and all, two wings with chambers for the staff, one wing with chambers for VIP ghosts, and I have in mind already two special wings for two of the four main bosses)
-A garden that will actually be a huge graveyard with tombs to explore

Time for me to start drawing. I'm still taking ideas.

Comments ( 7 )

Biiiiiiiiig.

Yeah, the human brain isn't very good at dealing with really huge things. Or randomness, for that matter.

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So true. At least, now, I'm starting to have a global shape of the castle in mind. I'm imagining the main wing to look a little like Minas Tirith from The Lord of the Rings. Floor 1 and 2 will be the same size, then floor 3 will be smaller and floor 4 will be even smaller. Then, other wings will branch from the main one in all directions, like a star. I see some bridge connecting some of the wings, and pillars supporting others, smaller ones above the ground. And all this in a style very gothique similar to the one of Dracula's Castle from Castlevania, especially like we can see in the two Lords of Shadows episodes.

I just thought of a funny idea for one of the boss ghosts. You know how Thanatos put Apple Bloom through his so-called Death Games? Well, what if we made that literal? As in, one of the boss ghosts could try to kill Apple Bloom and the others using sports-based tactics with a deadly twist. For instance, he could use a spear as a javelin to try and impale Apple Bloom, or crush her with an iron ball (like for shot put) that's spiked. The boss fight could be like a deadly version of the Olympics!

If you don't consider this a very good idea, that's because I'm partially joking about it.

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That's a very good idea actually, but it means that I will have to design some kind of open-aired area, probably on one of the wings of the castle. Maybe I will put the fitness part in this same wing. It actually made me thought of maybe also use a ghost that would be a little like Jigsaw from Saw fused with a game show presenter. Like, he forces Apple Bloom through a quiz or a game, and if she fails, she dies. A little like a Trivia Murder Party, if you know about it.

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I don't know about that, but I do know about... Snifit or Whiffit!

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Another good exemple. :rainbowlaugh:

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