[4:33:27 PM] Solocats: Aight, let me just relocate to my bed and laptop first then [4:33:41 PM] Solocats: I prefer doing stuff with you in bed [4:33:52 PM] Solocats: That came out wrong [4:33:55 PM] Queueduroy: You knew exactly what you were doing there. [4:34:00 PM] Queueduroy: Don't deny it, you slut. [4:34:03 PM] Queueduroy: : ^ D
So for a while now something's been bugging me about how you fuckers write, and I've been guilty of it, too. I call it the "Business Factory School of Writing" after Vincent Adultman from Bojack Horseman. Don't know what I'm talking about? Then shame on you, and take a gander:
People will only read the first two sentences of your description unless they're damn good sentences, so make sure they're damn good sentences. Explaining the fine details of your story will be boring because walls of text are shit and there won't be any context; your story description is not an appropriate place to dump exposition. Explain in broad, punchy terms what people will find in your
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I think this is jagwell prescot
Only if it's 100% natural ingredients, and all organic.