Okay so Radience… my destiny story with our favorite bug. Needless to say I did not like where it was going. I fell into the trap of telling instead of showing, suddenly exposition dumping a lot without time to explore and stuff. I have taken to unpublishing chapters 3 and 4 since those are the problem ones.
Look forward to name six and/or spike giving sunbutt death glare for what she's doing to Daybreaker
I just realized... Why the heck did they premake crowns and shoes for going evil? How else would they get them right away?
Its a good story. Hope the comment section gives you inspiration
Please dont forget Spke when the mane 6 go for a visit our poor DB filly.
I have just one sentences for this picture. I want you to sit there and think of the phrasing of it and all the different meaning it could have!
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