Jun
8th
2020
Pardon Our Dust · 7:39pm Jun 8th, 2020
In preparation for re-starting Someone Still Loves You, I've been reading back through the earlier chapters. As I've been doing so, I've been cleaning up some errors--mostly misplaced commas, standardizing names, and so on. I've also fixed a few small plot holes.
The biggest one: in the earlier chapters, it's contradictory whether Flurry Heart has been born or not. In the current draft, Cadance is still pregnant, and Flurry hasn't been born yet. I've scrubbed all references to her that I can find.
Anyways: expect a recap soon--perhaps as early as next week. Afterwards, I'll start plugging away on an actual chapter soon.
What episode is that screen cap from?
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Not sure... just grabbed it off Derpi. Looks like "Fluttershy Leans In," though.
Well, that's bad. I am glad you bring this fic to its end, but I hate it when an already published story gets changed by the author. Especially after I already read it and when I couldn't properly archive it yet.....
What changes did you make exactly and in which chapters do these changes occur?
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There's a number of small changes, again, mostly gramatical. Others are used to eliminate confusion: e.g., the single "Mrs. Cheerilee" is edited to be "Miss Cheerilee."
I removed minor references to Flurry Heart in Chapters 9 and 12 in order to better line up with the series timeline. That's the biggest content change.
ETA: there are regular dumps of the entire FimFiction archive, IIRC. If it really bothers you, you could dig up the pre-editing versions of the chapters.