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Heroic412227


Hi, my name is Heroic412227, but you can call me Heroic. I'm still learning how to be the best writer I can be.

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  • 6 weeks
    I've Finally Finished My New Story!

    ETwilight Learns How to Ice-Skate
    Twilight wants to learn how to ice-skate to impress Flash.
    Heroic412227 · 4.3k words  ·  12  2 · 346 views

    What do you think?

    0 comments · 55 views
  • 9 weeks
    My New Song Lyric Writing Style

    Ominous: What are we even talking about?
    Everybody had messed up already
    We threw ourselves down the void without doubt
    This discussion is senseless and petty

    There's no question to be posed
    We're all evil, case closed
    Did you forget everything that we’ve done?

    We all are beyond help
    And that includes myself
    And that's why I’ve got no choice but

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    0 comments · 67 views
  • 12 weeks
    I'm Going to Review OCs

    Hey there, everyone. After some thinking, I've decided that, instead of trying to get my own OCs reviewed by others, I'm going to try something different and review others' OCs. It's a fun idea and I can't wait to see the OCs that others have made.

    If you have any OCs that you'd like to be reviewed, please let me know and I'll tell you about my thoughts on them.

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    4 comments · 144 views
  • 16 weeks
    Which Character Do You Relate To The Most and Why?

    Hey there, everyone! You know? I've thinking about this idea for quite a while, but was too nervous to show it due to being not wanting to create any spoilers until it was fully realized yet. But thanks to a great friend's advice, I've decided to give it a shot to see your opinions on them so far.

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    0 comments · 168 views
  • 18 weeks
    Here's an Update

    I know I promised myself not to reveal anything until it's done, but due to writer's block, perfectionism, and procrastination, I'm having trouble finishing a certain story that needs to get done before any unexpected circumstances and complications. While I'm not going to spoil what I'm working on until it's absolutely done, I need some advice on this predicament that I'm having in order to

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May
18th
2020

How to write a more sympathetic and relatable antagonist? · 12:37am May 18th, 2020

I think I'm losing my touch on how to write a well-developed and complex antagonist, or character in general. Can someone help me get my groove back when it comes to creating new and good characters from scratch? I promise I won't bother anybody about this anymore if you help me. Sorry if I still am.

Comments ( 7 )

How exactly would you want help?

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I want my character, Odium to have a good tragic backstory and a fleshed-out and complex personality without it being too cliché and melodramatic or making him too perfect or unlikable. Sorry if I'm being too vague.

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I'll try and see if I can come up with something

Be a villain or imagine being one.
Try to step inside the shoes of your villains.
Actually, you should be inside all of your chars.
Apologies, If I've told you this before.

If you want an example let me know, I've been doing this technique for a while.
I have posted one example here.

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Thanks. Do you wanna see Odium's personality?

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What do you think of Odium's new personality?

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Can you get inside Odium's head?

Could you write him from a first person view?
The story doesn't need to be, but you need to feel what he feels and thinks.

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