Just finished Consonance and Dissonance · 11:15pm May 16th, 2020
I just finished my first pony story, and it's a little rough, but I'm super happy with it. Consonance and Dissonance was my quarantine project, and I'm pretty proud of myself for finishing it. I would love to hear from people what they liked, what they didn't like, how much of a talentless hack I am, etc.
My next project is nearly ready to start posting the first bits, once the editing is done. it's huge (200,000 words so far, and most likely will be twice that by the time it's done) and I'm incredibly happy with the way it's turning out. I hope to be able to finish and post a chapter a week, but work is insane right now (I work retail, and we just reopened after a month quarantine, so things are super chaotic) so I don't know when the first chapter will drop.
I was very pleased with this story. I looked forward to every update. My only criticism was that the ending felt a bit rushed and the fight felt a bit one-sided in Aria's favor. Afterall Midnight is a living breathing Apocalypse level threat. Overall though this was an excellent read and I can't wait to see what you post next.
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I really appreciate your insights! I think one of my weaknesses as a writer are complex action scenes, so you're probably right that it feels rushed. I am glad you enjoyed it, too.