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"I can't just do something a little bit. It's all of me, or nothing." — Madeline, Celeste

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  • 36 weeks
    My Final Thoughts on The Bonds of Love

    And that’s that. That’s the end.

    It’s been quite the ride, hasn’t it? Over a year spent writing The Bonds of Love, and over a year and a half spent discussing the actual writing process.

    I think I’ve said everything I had to say or even could say about my story, but well? Come on, you all know me enough by now to know I just can’t shut up even when I should.

    Sooo…?

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  • 37 weeks
    The Writing of The Bonds of Love (Epilogue: Love), final part

    And here we are at last... The final third of the Epilogue's discussion, and thus, the final major installment of the Writing of The Bonds of Love.

    No need to dawdle any further, I think. Let's get right into it!


    ~ Our Final Goodbyes ~

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    2 comments · 117 views
  • 38 weeks
    The Writing of The Bonds of Love (Epilogue: Love), part two

    And we’re back with the second half of this chapter’s discussion, so let’s not waste any more time and get right into it!


    ~ The More Things Change, the More They Stay the Same ~

    If this section’s title didn’t already give it away, not much has changed at all in the lovely town of Ponyville.

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    1 comments · 85 views
  • 39 weeks
    The Writing of The Bonds of Love (Epilogue: Love), part one

    Here we are. It’s been a long time coming, but we’ve finally reached the end, and what a wild ride it was getting to this point! With no time to waste, let’s bring this commentary to a close and discuss the grand finale of The Bonds of Love!


    ~ To the Future! ~

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  • 40 weeks
    The Writing of The Bonds of Love (Chapter Fifteen: Family, Part Two), continued.

    And we’re back for the final part of the Ch.15(Family, Part Two) discussion!

    The story so far: After a grueling impromptu therapy session, Gallus has finally won Ocean Flow’s approval, and the duo now races toward the surface world to inform Silverstream of this glorious development, alongside an explanation for why such approval was refused for so terribly long…

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May
4th
2020

The Bonds of Love Progression Update! · 12:20am May 4th, 2020

Hello, Everyone! So! Chapter 1 of The Bonds of Love is now up and ready for everyone to read! I hope you're all enjoying it so far and are looking forward to the next chapter! But now that we're on that subject; when do I plan to post Chapter 2?

Well, I mentioned it in the author's note at the end of Ch. 1, but now that I am actually awake have a chance to go over it fully, here's how I'm doing it:

I don't intend to post a chapter until I've at least finished the next two chapters after it. This is because I still keep going over the chapters I've currently written over and over again, making tiny little changes/corrections where I see them.

Most of it is making grammar corrections or taking out unnecessary fluff. But a fair bit of it is because I need/want to go back into the previous chapter and tweak something to make the story "Flow better" if that makes any sense. So until I finish Chapter 4, I don't intend to post Chapter 2.

Having said that! As I also said in my author's note, I already have Ch. 2 - 3 completed. I still want to go over Ch. 2 about twenty two more times, but it is - for the most part - done. And because I know how annoying it is for an "Incomplete" story to stay as such for too long, if Chapter 4 is taking a long time to finish, I will post chapter 2 regardless. Now that begs the question as to when that will be...

Well, I don't want to put some arbitrary due date on myself and fly into a stressful frenzy, trying to complete Chapter 4 as quickly as I can just to post the second one. Call me a perfectionist, but I'd rather take plenty of time to ensure the next chapter is as good as I can make it to be, instead of rushing it all out and risking the final product not being satisfactory.
I'm sorry that that's the way I'm handling it instead of just posting the chapters regardless.

But putting my personal hang-ups aside, the latest I'll give myself is somewhere around the 20th - 23rd.

To be honest, I am still a little uneasy about posting the story as I am finishing it, as opposed to completing the entire thing first and then releasing it at a steady pace.
For one thing, if I did the latter, I'd have been able to go over the entire package as well as keep some semblance of a proper upload schedule. However, I pretty much vanished after posting A Day for Family, and I didn't want make anyone have to wait for months on end to see what I did next.

Regardless, I posted The Bonds of Love, intending to complete it chapter-by-chapter as I went. And whether I like it or not, I'm committing to that decision. So, yeah. Chapter 2 will be posted around the 20th - 23rd if I can't finish Chapter 4 by then. God help my stress levels and blood pressure if that happens

With all of that out of the way, how exactly am I fairing regarding what I currently have done?

Well? To be honest, I'm way behind where I wanted to originally be. If you read the blog post where I confirmed A Day for Family would have a sequel, you likely remember that I said that I was - at the time - almost done with Chapter 2.
I...gravely miscalculated where I was when writing that blog post. I was more "halfway done" with Chapter 2 instead of "almost done." To make matters worse, if I had finished the chapter as it was, it would have been well-over 40k words.
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Yeah, no. Just...no. :twilightoops:

You can probably already tell that the chapter lengths of The Bonds of Love are probably going to be on the longer side, but I'd have to be stupidly oblivious to think anyone would want to read one single chapter that was over 40k words! A one-shot, maybe? But a chapter!? No!
As a result of that, I ended up splitting the original Chapter 2 into both Ch. 2 and Ch. 3. So that was fun!
And yes. That means that Ch. 2 - 3 as they are now are around 20k words each. Sorry about that. :applejackconfused:

Other than that? Like I said, I still want to rigorously check over Ch. 2 - 3 about twenty two or three more times, but yeah. They're good to go for the most part. I took a bit of a breather after I posted Chapter 1, but now I'm off to go start Chapter 4!

I have a deadline after all! :raritywink:

Side note: Once again, if you read my previous blog post you might remember that I said I would talk about what my writing process for A Day for Family was like(If that even interested anyone at all :derpyderp1:). Well? I don't want to bog down this post any more than I have to, so I'll talk about that in a different blog post. When will that be? Around the same time that I post Chapter 2.

In any case, I hope you all have a wonderful day and that the rest of the Bonds of Love will meet all of your expectations!

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Try not to strain yourself

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Don't worry; I'm trying not to! :pinkiehappy:

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