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DanishDash


Why do I write? Because it's fun! :D

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    Am I dead?

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    Hello. :twilightsmile:

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May
1st
2020

Fallen Knight has fallen · 3:18pm May 1st, 2020

I am currently writing the last chapter of Fallen Knight.

Though it is going slow, I want to finish this story as I don't want to leave it ending on a cliff hanger.

You guys have shown insane amount of support for it, people keep favoring it, even though I will admit myself it is not my best work. Though I have enjoyed working on it, it has given me a lot of lessons. Things like pacing, not to write for the sake of the scenes, but for the sake of the story, and you guys deserve better than that.

Looking back there has been a lot of ups and downs with it. I love Star Wars, despite what some have suggested, I do care about the lore and the history, but then again, I am writing about a Jedi entering another dimension an MLP dimension no less. It was getting frustrating getting private messages telling me why they thought the the story sucked, and I know it comes from a place of passion.

There have been fair critics, critics I have taken a point to remember what they say and try to improve my writing. Then there is the ones reading a bit of a chapter, then writing a comment, then reading a bit more of the chapter, then writing another, and then do the the same for the next chapters.

Truth be told, I simply got too tired of it doing a crossover.

Then I remember only 8 had disliked it, and 128 had given it a like.

So I will finish this story, and I think I will rewrite it one day. Make it longer, add new characters, some more lore and history. Because chapters were rushed, and I did make them to write a scene I thought cool, and not for the sake of the overall plot.

So lessons have been learned, and I will take those lessons in creating something bigger and better. I probably won't please everybody, but that's okay.

So I will finish the story, and then rewrite it in the future, add the sequel I had in mind in the rewrite, and I will probably look for a co-writer, or an editor.

At any ways guys you have been patient, and kept supporting it, and so I wanna finish the story so we can have a conclusion. :eeyup:

Comments ( 2 )

good luck and take it easy.

I'm sorry to hear that you are gonna close down this story. I do like this one as I do like Star Wars and MLP and seeing how it was going if slowly. I do hope that you do rewrite it into an even better story.

I do see a bit of Anakin in Rainbow Dash, and while proud at times and really headstrong she could become a great Jedi. Though I could see Chrysalis becoming a Sith Lord with an army or crack commando team of Changelings of force users like the Inquisitiors.

Good luck and know with any good story is like a journey, you may not know where your heading and may have to backtrack at times, but in time you'll enjoy the path or curse it and come out wiser or with more knowledge of what to do or not to do.

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