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Help please · 5:55pm Apr 27th, 2020

I am open to ideas of plots especially with these particular characters please

Trixie
Moondancer
Sonata

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Trixie? Okay, Celestia assigns Dusk to tutor Trixie in the areas in the school she is having trouble with (which is MOST of them); partially to help Dusk learn about friendship and partially a semi-friendly wager with Cadance. Anyway, Dusk helps Trixie do well enough to graduate from the school with a B+ average as well as tone down the ego JUST enough where, when she DOES finally begin her career as a stage magician, she is careful to ONLY make boasts that she can actually back up (though she HAS learned how to teleport, gotten good enough with telepathy to pull off some pretty impressive mind-reading and illusions with up to three targets at a time and has gotten good enough with telekinesis, weather magic and general slight-of-hoof to give most audiences a darn good show). Dusk, meanwhile, has learned to lighten up enough to enjoy Trixie's magic shows and actually volunteer to be her assistant on more than one occasion. One such time was Trixie's FIRST magic show in Ponyville, where Dusk vouched for Trixie (i.e. "I used to tutor her in Celestia's School For Gifted Unicorns. She is actually a pretty decent mare once you learn to look past the ego) and assisted her for the entirety of her show. After the show is over, Trixie invites Dusk back to her trailer for a - more private show - in order to properly show her appreciation. The rest of the evening is best left to the adult imagination (though it is said that they were BOTH so loud that everyone in Ponyville could hear them.

Moondancer? Dusk tells Twinkle Shine, Lemon Hearts and Minuette that he has some quick research to do, but WILL be at Moondancer's party. Dusk actually keeps his word, arriving at Moondancer's party to at least explain that he and Spike will have to go to Ponyville to oversee the Summer Sun Celebration. Moondancer offers to go with them, giving Dusk a look that makes it impossible to refuse her without feeling like the world's biggest jerk (and also acknowledging that, with Moondancer there with him and Spike, he could get the research for Nightmare Moon done twice as fast). When Nightmare Moon returns, Dusk makes Moondancer stay behind to protect Spike (since he knows how serious the situation is and doesn't want to chance either one of them getting hurt). After Nightmare Moon is defeated, Dusk and Moondancer BOTH choose to stay in Ponyville. Over the course of time, Dusk and Moondancer's friendship gradually grows into something MUCH stronger (and when Moondancer confesses to being in love with Dusk, she ALSO confesses to being jealous of Dusk's OTHER female friends [Rarity and Fluttershy in particular as THEY are the two prettiest], though Dusk calmly reassures Moondancer that his friendship with the rest of the Mane Six is just THAT - friendship. He could never betray Moondancer like that) .

Sonata? Well, after the Dazzlings are defeated at the end of Rainbow Rocks, the Rainbooms offer the Siren Trio a chance to turn their lives around. Adagio and Aria refuse, but Sonata accepts, under the provision that Dusk and Spike take her back to Equestria with them. What follows next is pretty similar to what Fluttershy went through with Discord in "Keep Calm and Flutter On", though it's happening to Dusk and Sonata. Over the course of time, the two become much, MUCH closer and, well, you can guess the rest.

And that's the best I can think of.

5251496
Thanks for the ideas

5251707
You're quite welcome.

Oh, and a couple of minor additions to Trixie's story; In addition to the stuff already listed, Dusk ALSO helped her learn a pretty fair amount about fire magic, ice magic and transmutation (which combined with the telepathy-based mind-reading and illusions, teleportation, telekinesis, weather magic and general slight-of-hoof already mentioned there, only increases her repertoire as a showmare, truly making her one of the best showponies in Equestria).

5251827
Not sure I would use all the details but I may use them as a guideline so thanks

5251857
Fair enough. Thanks again.

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