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Lucar


A French brony who loves to read and write. My English is not perfect, but I will do my best!

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  • 4 weeks
    TV Tropes Page Apple Bloom's Mansion

    Someone made a TV Tropes page about the Apple Bloom's Mansion saga.

    Link.

    I made quite the number of tropes without knowing, lol.

    1 comments · 51 views
  • 7 weeks
    Subspace Army Tree Before Chapter 168

    Here is the tree showing the officers' ranks in the Subspace Army before chapter 168. I advise to read the chapter first before seeing the image.

    0 comments · 90 views
  • 8 weeks
    "New" Story and New Group

    I'm starting to write a new story, or not really. It will actually be a compilation of stories in the universe of UME. Tales From The Omniverse. More than a compilation, this is a group made by Cyrus Colter there. In this group, people will be able to post their Tales happening in UME's universes.

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    5 comments · 153 views
  • 10 weeks
    Sizes Precision

    With A Sweetie Dream Land's rewriting, I have changed some sizes.

    As of the starts of A Sweetie Dream Land, Kirby was 20cm tall. A Waddle Dee is about 30cm, Dedede, about one meter, Meta Knight, over 30cm (maybe 35cm, not sure yet), and Sweetie Void, about 50cm.

    By the time of The Forgotten Land, Kirby is 30cm tall, and Sweetie is about 60cm.

    0 comments · 139 views
  • 10 weeks
    Rewriting A Sweetie Dreamland

    I'm going to start to rewrite A Sweetie Dreamland, essentially to change the verb tenses. I'm also going to change "Dreamland" to "Dream Land", maybe change a few lines here and there, and so on. I don't know how long it will take, but I think that I should be done before the end of February.

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Feb
28th
2020

Chapter 119 preview · 1:52pm Feb 28th, 2020

Since the next chapter of A Sweetie Dreamland won't come out for some time, here's a little preview to make you wait. Enjoy!


Under the eternal night sky of Rainbow Resort, not a sound is heard, not even from the many people watching behind portals, all holding their breath.

Sweetie Belle and Kirby are facing each other in front of the Fountain of Dreams, separated by a dozen meters.

"Ready?" asks the filly with a smile.


Hero of Popstar
SWEETIE BELLE

Kirby nods, determined, but smiling too. "Poyo!"


Hero of Popstar
KIRBY

.......................................................

They charge at each other.

Sweetie Belle is the first one to attack with a punch that Kirby easily avoids thanks to his flexible body. The puffball then gives an uppercut to Sweetie's chin, but the filly spins, avoiding it, and gives him a buck that Kirby parries with his arms, but it still makes him slide back a few meters. He rolls to avoid a beam sword thrown at him like a spear, grabs it, and throws it back at the filly who easily catches it in the air. Kirby then charges back at her, and Sweetie readies her sword, only for Kirby to give her a sliding kick through her legs, making her trip, but while on the ground, she fires an energy ball from her back legs at the puffball, only for him to roll out of the way.

As she gets up, Kirby tries to inhale her, so she turns her body into metal to resist the vortex, so he gives up, jumps, and gives a drop kick that she parries before she grabs his leg and slams him on the ground, only for Kirby to use his arms to stop himself from being slammed. With his arms on the ground, he then starts spinning while Sweetie is still holding his leg, throwing her away, but she quickly comes back to headbutt him, so Kirby propels himself away, and Sweetie headbutts the ground instead, creating a small hole.

Grabbing one of her beam swords, she then charges at Kirby and swings, swings, swings, only for Kirby to avoid all of them by flattening his body or dodging. So Sweetie Belle fires a magical beam that Kirby deflects with his arm before he tries to punch her, leading Sweetie to place her beam sword on the way. But then, a familiar sword appears in Kirby's hands, and catches Sweetie Belle off guard with it, forcing her to jump back to not be cut.

Sweetie Belle looks at Kirby in surprise. "The Sword ability?! But you haven't even eaten a sword or a sword user!"

The sword in Kirby's hands disappears as he smirks at her. Then, he charges at her before he's suddenly envelopped in fire, turning him into a fireball that is stopped by a shield that is almost broken.

"And now the Fire ability?" shouts the filly. "Kirby... Have you discovered how to use abilities without inhaling, like your father?"

"Poyo!" shouts Kirby with a nod and a smile. "Father train!"

Sweetie Belle blinks. "So you really trained? I had a hard time believing it when I went in the training room. You never trained before. Did you train for me? For this fight?"

"Poyo!"

She giggles. "I'm flattered." Her ten cannons start levitating around her. "Time to get a little more serious then." And she charges back toward Kirby.



Everyone looks at the portals showing the fight in confusion or disbelief.

"This explosion looked like the one that happened to Twilight before she..." says Rainbow Dash.

Twilight turns to Celestia, awed. "Did you feel it? Has she really...?"

Celestia nods. "Yes, she has... I felt exactly the same thing when it was you and Cadance." She gets up from her chair. "I must go and-"

She's interrupted by everything suddenly shaking strongly. The shaking continues for a few seconds before, suddenly, in the portal, back at the Fountain of Dream, they can see a hoof punch through space, cracking it.

Or rather... a hoof-shaped hole, as if made of void.

Comments ( 13 )

So, there's your six then. Kirby vs. Sweetie Belle, both sides. Kirby vs. Alicorn Sweetie Belle, both sides. Kirby vs. Sweetie Soul, both sides.

Minor nitpick: Kirby's Up Special is actually from Super Star's Cutter; Sword stole it in either Amazing Mirror or Squeak Squad (I've only played the latter) and didn't give it back until Return to Dreamland.

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I'm not limiting Kirby's moves to only those in the Smash Bros Saga. He was really using the sword, not the cutter attack.

.. CALLED IT!!!!

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I’m scared of Kirby now:unsuresweetie:

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Also, I just edited the blog with the pause description. You should go look, you will be surprised. *Gives a Cheshire Cat smile*

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You should be, but you should also be scared of Sweetie Belle. :trollestia:

"Kirby... Have you discovered how to use abilities without inhaling, like your father?"

Smash Bros Kirby without the limits of games... This truly is the Ultimate duel!:pinkiehappy:

Everyone looks at the portals showing the fight in confusion or disbelief.

Wait, I thought everyone was still on Pop Star.

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*Gives a Cheshire Cat smile*

"I've seen a Pegasus without a grin, but a grin without a Pegasus?":raritywink: Also, do you like the Peanuts (in other words, Charlie Brown) comic strips? There's one where Snoopy does a "Cheshire Beagle" trick.

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Wait, I thought everyone was still on Pop Star.

They're still on Popstar, but of course, they aren't in the Rainbow Resorts. They're back in Dreamland, safe (or they think). There are also portals opened in Equestria so the ponies who couldn't come, like Luna, or Sweetie's classmates, could also watch.

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I don't mean to nitpick because I love this story but in the finished version fell should feel

Twilight turns to Celestia, awed. "Did you fell it? Has she really...?"

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