Gentleman for Mares Chapter 3 Draft Status · 7:03pm Nov 17th, 2012
Chapter 3 draft has been done, and will now move to the process of proof-reading and editing.
As we wait for that to happen, I wanted to point out something: this will be the first of a two-part chapter. Originally, I intended to have it all nicely wrapped in one package, but exploring the world for Gentleman for Mares made it a bit too cumbersome to read as one chapter. So, by separating it into two, I could add more details of the world where Humanity and Equestria live in relative harmony, and as a bonus, add more clop for the second part.
That is not to say the first doesn't have any clop. It does. . . ^_^
Secondly, I wanted to advise that Harry finally arrives in Ponyville, and meets up with two of the Mane Six. No, he's not going to sleep with them. Well, at least, not yet. Maybe.
Third, its the longest chapter so far. I think I clocked 22 pages on my Word Document.
I think I'm getting pretty good practice on the clop and first-person narrative. It's actually my second time to try the latter, the first time being a confusing jumble of jumping perspectives.
Anyways, I think that's all for now. Later people.
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I hate you for taking so long! You must hurry! Oh, btw, my version is coming along nicely...except for when I hit the wrong button and the whole story gets deleted without being saved. But I should have the first chapter done soon. Keep up the work! (PM me who the manes he meets, please?)
I love this story. But, could you maybe include maybe Zecora or Gilda, It may defeat the purpose but it'd be awesome.
Superb. I shall wait eagerly but patiently.
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I'll see what I can do. Gilda's going to be different, definitely, but Zecora is pretty difficult.
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Its being worked on as we speak.
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How amusing would it be to see his reaction to the clearly African (a zebra no less) individual living in a hut in the forest and making witch-doctor medicine?
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I think he'd be more bothered on how she keeps rhyming. In the end, it turns into a musical as they get it on.
Huh. Okay. Why the hell not? XD
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You monster!
Now it must happen.
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Nuuuu! Maybe. One day. xD xD
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Poor Wingman, destined to be drawn ever deeper into this bizarre yet sexually satisfying world of curiously (un)dressed ponies and assorted others.
Lucky bastard.
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