Can You See Me Now: Chapter 4

With chapter 4, we're at the meat of the story where the second round of confrontations details more of Zephyr, Marble and Snips' deep rooted feelings about their lives. This point in the story is the fundamental idea I had when I first came up with the idea for this story; so I hope it impacts in all the right ways as I'm am not trying to force unnatural or out of character motivations. I can genuinely see these three feeling this way based on what has happened and how they are used and portrayed in the show. Thanks to everyone reading and I hope you enjoy.

ECan You See Me Now

• MLP: FiM
• Adventure
• Drama

Zephyr Breeze, Marble Pie and Snips set themselves on their friends and family after receiving greatly enhanced abilities from an unknown Unicorn.

• Snips
• OC
• Main 6
• Marble Pie
• Zephyr Breeze

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[MLPFollower]

What I’m still wondering is Renaissance’s true motives. Is she a well-intentioned mare going about things the wrong way or is she a power-hungry mastermind manipulating poor unfortunate souls to fulfill her own means?

[Marezinger Z]

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We get there soon. Renaissance, while the antagonist, is primarily a catalyst. Her motives and reasoning come to the surface when she finally meets Twilight who confronts her on what she has done.