Full Review · 1:11am Jan 13th, 2020
Hello to you all, my dear Readers.
I am here to give a full review for a rather polite and up-and-coming writer Stormy787. He has expressed his enjoyment of one of my own stories, Betrayed, and asked if he could write a sequel for it. I have agreed, and with my blessing, he has written the sequel, Just Close You Eyes.
After giving it a read, I have to say, this was a very enjoyable read. It has a lot of the emotion build up I was trying to illustrate in my story. You could feel as the character was being stricken with anger and grief, as well as doubt and pain. As you read, you can only imagine what the character is feeling, and how it sinks deep into your own emotional depths. Princess Cadance's choices and the emotional impacts that strike at not only Shining Armor, but even you the reader as you read are strong and last for a good amount of time. You will feel a flurry of emotions, matching the Princess' own emotional roller coaster. You will hate and yet sympathize with Armor as the webs of his scandal and lies unravel all around him, leading it almost open ended on what he would do. Personally, I expected him to take the broken webs and hang himself from the Crystal Empire. But I will let you readers make your impressions and interpretations on this story.
With all of this being said, I can say with confidence that this story is well written, well thought out, and I am grateful to have a reader who has been inspired to start his debut as a writer based off one of my pieces. To him, I say thank you. To my other readers, I say look at this story, see for yourself, and feel all that is to come.
Thank you, and enjoy