• Member Since 23rd May, 2013
  • offline last seen 8 hours ago

Holocron


Gaze within the Holocron and see what stories it has to tell.

More Blog Posts190

  • 17 weeks
    Emergency Commissions

    Hello to you all, my dear readers.

    I am putting this out because I am in a great need of money. My dog, a darling I have raised since she was a cheerful, skipping puppy, needs surgery for a fatty tumor in her chest.

    Read More

    6 comments · 325 views
  • 31 weeks
    Story Transfers

    Hello to you all, my Readers. For those of you who have enjoyed the many sexual misadventures of the Ram Pony, Terra, he is no longer with us. Instead, I have transfered ownership of him to the original client who commissioned him.
    You will find him here.

    Thank you all, and enjoy

    4 comments · 190 views
  • 43 weeks
    Any takers?

    To any and everyone interested,
    My Commissions are still Open, with plenty of Slots to give.

    Current Rate is:
    $20 per 1,000 words to a maximum of 10,000 words per Slot.

    Nothing is off the Table, I will write anything you want me to write, no questions asked.

    Hope to hear from you all soon!
    Message me if you're interested.

    5 comments · 159 views
  • 45 weeks
    Commissions are Still Open

    To any and everyone interested,
    My Commissions are still Open, with plenty of Slots to give.

    Current Rate is:
    $20 per 1,000 words to a maximum of 10,000 words per Slot.

    Nothing is off the Table, I will write anything you want me to write, no questions asked.

    Hope to hear from you all soon!
    Message me if you're interested.

    0 comments · 99 views
  • 55 weeks
    Getting into the Field

    Hello to you all my dear Readers,
    I am pleased to announce a new writer has joined us and is looking to make their way in this delightful field.

    Read More

    3 comments · 341 views
Jan
13th
2020

Full Review · 1:11am Jan 13th, 2020

Hello to you all, my dear Readers.
I am here to give a full review for a rather polite and up-and-coming writer Stormy787. He has expressed his enjoyment of one of my own stories, Betrayed, and asked if he could write a sequel for it. I have agreed, and with my blessing, he has written the sequel, Just Close You Eyes.

After giving it a read, I have to say, this was a very enjoyable read. It has a lot of the emotion build up I was trying to illustrate in my story. You could feel as the character was being stricken with anger and grief, as well as doubt and pain. As you read, you can only imagine what the character is feeling, and how it sinks deep into your own emotional depths. Princess Cadance's choices and the emotional impacts that strike at not only Shining Armor, but even you the reader as you read are strong and last for a good amount of time. You will feel a flurry of emotions, matching the Princess' own emotional roller coaster. You will hate and yet sympathize with Armor as the webs of his scandal and lies unravel all around him, leading it almost open ended on what he would do. Personally, I expected him to take the broken webs and hang himself from the Crystal Empire. But I will let you readers make your impressions and interpretations on this story.

With all of this being said, I can say with confidence that this story is well written, well thought out, and I am grateful to have a reader who has been inspired to start his debut as a writer based off one of my pieces. To him, I say thank you. To my other readers, I say look at this story, see for yourself, and feel all that is to come.
Thank you, and enjoy :twilightsmile:

Report Holocron · 639 views · Story: Betrayed ·
Comments ( 0 )
Login or register to comment