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Dec
27th
2019

Status of My Own Reality: · 7:31am Dec 27th, 2019

The story has reached parity with the chapter "Find yourself." from Pony-Me. Instead of the infodumping that was just showing the diary entries outright, the chapter in the original fiction instead puts Lisa's backstory into story form, piecing together the entries through Lisa as she reads them, letting the reader see a clear picture of who she was in the past.

Anyway, blurb over. I spent far more time than I probably needed to fighting through writer's block on how to start the chapter. I'm more or less satisfied with the result. If y'all want I could maybe post it in a blog or something. Just comment down below if you want that.

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