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YellowHornBrony


Brony from Nebraska. Also, I'm starting to write worth damn. My YouTube is here: https://www.youtube.com/channel/UCOFePTtAWYjYBdcxYF1LgmA

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  • 91 weeks
    Are These Blogs Getting Annoying Yet?

    Anyways, chapter 3 of Not Our Sunset II is out. Go read it.

    -YellowHornBrony

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  • 92 weeks
    And I Return... Again

    Not Our Sunset II's second chapter is out! Go give it a read and comment what you think!

    -Cheers!

    0 comments · 108 views
  • 146 weeks
    Update

    I'm working on the new chapter, but I hit a road block. I no longer have a computer. I won't have one for a few weeks either. The one I've been using is my school one, and now that I've graduated, I've had to return it. I promise it's coming, and I'l see you all then!

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  • 161 weeks
    Hello there...

    GENERAL KENOBI

    ...Anyways, working on something. Hopefully I've gotten better at writing over the last year and a half of being not at all interested in the show. You can thank my friends for reintroducing me to the beautiful work that is Equestria Girls. Keep an eye out for the next chapter of Not Our Sunset II and a side story project!

    -YellowHornBrony

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  • 207 weeks
    What I've Been Doing

    Hey guys,

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Dec
19th
2019

Not Our Sunset II Roadblock · 3:09pm Dec 19th, 2019

The biggest problem with me is I hate my own writing style. I rewrite and rewrite over and over again. While, for now, I have a set storyline, I have no idea how I'm going to write it. If anybody sees this, got any ideas? I already know it focuses on Pony Sunset and her time in Equestria, but I have no idea on how to continue or whether or not it's good. Help?

Comments ( 6 )

I can almost sense a Sunset to Sunset, heart to heart talk coming on.

In any case don't sweat it. Bring 'em together, throw in a little insecurity, maybe a bit of pony Sunset backstory. A revelation for human Sunset and it'll work out great.

Just a suggestion mind you.

5171819
Maybe not a bad idea for an Epilogue. The story takes place during the first one, but in Equestria.

5171846
So it's focusing on pony Sunset? How much time has passed since she left?

5171927
So some reconciliation with Celestia, exploring Ponyville (probably similar to episode 1), some sadness from missing the Rainbooms after spending time with the mane 6 and some studying of Starswirl's portal magic spell.

5171993
Well it does take place between Twilight's coronation and The actual birth of Luster (I'm assuming she hasn't been born yet)

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