New Story! · 4:41am Dec 18th, 2019
For the past couple months I have been thinking of a new story idea, I'm not too sure how far it'll go but at least it's something to work on. Basically it's a bit of a detective/agent type of story which involves an agency hunting down "The mare killer." Each section of the story will be written from the perspective of a different agent, each receiving different orders at different points in time. A bit of a spoiler but, some agents will be killed in their sections. Anyways! Here's a little concept sort of thing I've written up, any feedback would be greatly appreciated it! Thanks!
October 17th 23:07 20XX
I glanced through the small crack between the boards I was hidden behind. I could see him, the elusive mare killer. He showed up out of nowhere months ago, became one of the most feared criminals practically overnight. Time and time again he had managed to slip away, and had not failed to take a life along with him. This wasn’t going to be easy.
I pulled my pistol out of my saddle bag, using my magic to levitate it between the boards. The goal was to immobilize him, I had no intention of letting a monster like him get away with a quick and easy death. I took a deep breath and steadied my gun, lining up the sights with his right fore hoof. Without hesitation I pulled the trigger then instantly pointed and shot at the left. An odd moment passed before he fell forward onto the ground, almost as though he were being held up by someth-
“Your aim is incredible! That must have been at least 40 hoofs away!” The voice came from directly behind me.
I gasped. I swung my pistol around towards the voice but it was instantly knocked to the ground by a knife.
“W-Who are you? You shouldn’t be intervening with the Pony Neutralization Agency…” My voice began to trail off.
“Oh I believe I have every right to intervene,” he paused for a moment, “being the only reason they exist after all…” He stepped forward pressing his nose against mine, I could see him clearly now, there was no doubt about it, it was the mare killer!
“Oh my, you’re a beautiful mare.” For a second he seemed flustered, this was the perfect time to attack. I quickly jumped up and prepared to smash his head. He reacted instantly pulling me to the ground then pressed a cold object next to my head. OH CELESTIA IT’S MY GUN!
“It was a noble effort, but this is where it ends.” And with that he pulled the trigger.January 23rd 10:05 20XX +1
Four months ago agent 03 went missing, then a month later her body mysteriously appeared again, she had been beaten and shot to death. The very same night the body was discovered, agent 09 was found at the scene, a bullet straight to the head. Her current state remains unclear, however she survived but appears to have suffered significant memory loss…
I skimmed over the rest of the briefing. Disgraceful, the P.N.A had kept this under wraps for that long? Even from the rest of agency? We were all told of the recovery of 03’s body, but there was no mention of 09 until now. It was believed that she had left the agency and now lived under a new identity. [To be continued]
