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A Loveliest of Trees Redux? · 1:19am Dec 12th, 2019

Might just do a redux of the whole thing because my god there is some cringy shit in there. I wanna make it simpler and exclude all the named songs and shit like that.

Don't worry, the base story (which is already a redux lol) won't be going anywhere. I'll just call it the special edition or something (like star wars).

Just a thought. Not sure. Also, still writing. My upload rate has slown to a crawl, but I'm still doing it. Word by word, lol. Life is busy. I have a finite amount of energy.

Bottom line, still here, might do redux of Loveliest of Trees

Update: https://www.fimfiction.net/blog/881787/its-gonna-happen

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Absolutely. It'll be great to see how far you've gotten since your inception.

Comment posted by ZombieWarrior478 deleted Dec 12th, 2019

Okay, dude!


BTW, there are only two parts that I DIDN'T like about that story.

The first one was the moment in which Hoops and Score set Coppermane up to look like a cheater. That was painful for me to read.

The second one is the part where the Rainbooms turn their backs on Copper since they don't believe him. It just reminded me of the stupid "Anon-A-Miss story!"

Other than those two moments, I enjoyed the story!

Personally, to be honest, I don't see why you need to redo it. I may just be the odd one out here, but.... as is, the story really doesn't need much changing.

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The second one is the part where the Rainbooms turn their backs on Copper since they don't believe him. It just reminded me of the stupid "Anon-A-Miss story!"

To be fair here, the pictures looked pretty real in Trixie and Coppermane's case, and if you saw your best friend's boyfriend seemingly cheating on your best friend, you'd be pretty pissed as well.

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Painful = you felt for the character, or painful = cringy and bad and wtf were you thinking

2nd point I agree.

Go for it

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no clue what you're talking about.

you're under no obligation to make comments at all on my content, regardless if it's a redo or not

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I felt for the character.

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