New poem

If I died today, what would you say

Would you even care at all

I hold back my tears, and face all my fears

But as hard as I try, I still wanna die,

I fight for love, but it seems to pass me by

I wanna jump and see if I can fly

All the pain is driving me insane

I fear I have nothing more to gain,

I do nothing but fail

I don't think there is any way I can prevail

I can't help but wonder what is wrong with

me, and why am I this way

I no longer want to stay i just wanna run

away, is this life really worth living?

Or should I just end it all, i think this is my

final downfall.

Comments

[Terry the human]

Kody. Please don't imply something t h at s not good.

[Kody The Ultimate Brony]

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Check your discord

[Darth Wrex]

Impressive.

[THERDSTORYWHISPERER]

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Yeah, please don’t!

[SamSwordsman123]

I hope you're not considering suicide. I know life can tough, but it can get better. I know how hard it can be, I was in a dark place for a long time myself but now I'm more in the light thanks to mlp.

[Kody The Ultimate Brony]

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Do you want honesty?

[SamSwordsman123]

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Oh please dont do it! You can find something good in life! No matter how hard or dark it seems there can always be a light. Dont give up! Try calling suicide prevention, they can help.

[Fallout dude 50]

Dude I’m very worried about you

[ponybird21]

This is a beautiful, absolutely beautiful, poem. The emotions and raw intensity is so well done and perfected, it flows in a congruent thought. Personally I love it!

[Shimmer_Bolt]

Kody, would you like to talk?

[Kody The Ultimate Brony]

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Yes please

[Shimmer_Bolt]

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I've sent a private message via fimfiction.

[Kody The Ultimate Brony]

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I replied

[Shimmer_Bolt]

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Now I have replied.

[Lunar_Glow]

Very emotional and powerful poetry dude. Life will get better, believe it or not.

[Kody The Ultimate Brony]

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I'm trying not to

[SamSwordsman123]

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Phew that's a relief.