Amending Fences (Re-Review)

Thought I'd re-review the ep using my Yugioh system... (I used the 10 stars system before)

LP: 8000

No the worse thing about Twilight being Princess of Friendship/Equestia... is she even being ALIVE. Bitch like her shouldn't be living!
-200 (Just because)

LP: 8000 -----> 7800

Even then, when Twilight hadn't many friends, I deemed her pathetic. She wasn't dedicated to it enough, and decided to abandon it and become an even bigger disgrace than she was before.

-200 (For intolerable character development)

LP: 7800 -----> 7600

"How could I have let this happen?" Um... because your a narrow-minded twat who doesn't ACTUALLY think.

-200 for poor planning.

LP: 7600 -----> 7400

Ugh!! Minuet's giddiness, optimism and friendship boasting is giving me indigestion.

-500

LP: 7400 -----> 6900

Oh joy, more friend bonding... GAG!!!

-500

LP: 6900 -----> 6400

You call that "learning a lot"? PFT-HAHAHAHAHAHA!! You are so pathetic Twilight. You may have learned what it means to be a "So-called" good friend, but you have a lot to learn about ALTERNATE ENDINGS and REALITIES that you or you stupid Friendship won't fix.

-500

LP: 6400 -----> 5900

I approve of the condition of Moondancer's home.

-No damage

I especially approve of her slamming the door in Twilight's face. Very good.

-No damage.

"No pony looks at her, or says "hello" or even gives her a smile. It's like she doesn't even exist."

and I couldn't be happier. THIS... THIS is the improvement, and the GOOD, I've been looking for. I want to see less lovey-dovey friendship bonding and more of THAT.

-No damage

Here we go, Twilight Sparkle... champion of Obsessive Compulsive Disorder. She's always butting in to other ponies lives, getting in their faces and not leaving until they comply with her wishes (Even though she once encouraged Pinkie Pie to stop perusing Cranky Doodle's friendship)

Get it through your head, TWIT-LIGHT. Some of us don't want to improve, not if it means doing things we HATE, and even if we do wish to improve, we CERTAINLY don't wish to do it YOUR way. Your way is just ONE way, it's not the ONLY WAY.

So you BUG OFF, girl, and pitch your friendship someplace else!!

-500

LP: 5900 -----> 5400

*Sits back and applauds Moondancer for standing up to Twilight's pestering*

-No damage

Uh-oh... she's starting to give her a chance...

-200

LP: 5400 -----> 5200

"The last thing I need is a bunch of ridiculous friend-making to keep me from studying!"

"I tried friendship, and it's just not for me."

Marvelous, stupendous, poetry in motion!!! (She's exactly how I feel about my fics and vids)

-No damage

Studying for no real reason... Not looking for a job, not looking for aspects, not even telling anyone.

EXCELLENT!! I LOVE IT!!

-No damage

Moondancer brushing Twilight off to tears, I wish I could give LP back (Can't, it's the rules)

-No damage

Oh, Twilight... just back off already!!

-200 for not taking a hint

LP: 5200 -----> 5000

Oh great, it's Pinkie Pie, the second most annoying of the Mane Cast. (Glad I'm FINALLY toning her bubbly hyper attitude down in Starfleet 9)

-200

LP: 5000 -----> 4800

I approve of the walked away "I don't do parties"

-No damage

Mental and tearful breakdown...

Ahhhhhh... delightful

-No damage

???....!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

-Score halved!!

LP: 4800 -----> 2400

Any and all respect I had for Moondancer is gone! She made up with Twilight instead of continuing to reject her.

Moondancer better feel lucky she is female, or I'd have placed her in a fic and put ten bullets through her head!!!

FINAL SCORE: 2400

I was so close! So close to watching Twilight finally fail and this time it would stick with her... then again, not like I didn't see it coming the first time. It's MLP, a world were everyone MUST be happy, MUST be optimistic, MUST believe in friendship, and where problems MUST be solved.

...Ugh!