New chapter of: "Different"

Well, I published a new chapter.

I just wanted to know what the 2 readers that read it think about it.

Comments

[Tael_Spinner]

The way you portray the characters is continuing to improve well with every chapter. The only thing that makes the pace odd to me is that I have no idea where the story is going yet. That isn't a criticism, it often happens in stories and is part of why I wait to comment on things regarding your story.

Asperger Syndrome is nothing to be mocked and I definitely don't see you doing so with this. I see this piece as part of your own coming to terms with having it. Many on this site have it and, like many other positions on the spectrum, have it to varying degrees. It is simply an explanation for why we who have it act and do things the way we do them.

You are lucky to have been diagnosed at a younger age as there are ways and people to help you in dealing with it. It won't make everything easier, but will help give you some mental tools to help you deal with situations.

Still very interested to see where this story goes.

[Tintop18]

I like this chapter and i can see the improvements made but i would have to agree that pace is odd. I'm still willing to see where this goes.

[Hardwired]

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I've noticed that also, I don't have much experience with writing stories. So, I can't seem to get the pacing down, but I'll manage to fix it.

[Tintop18]

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It's ok take your time.

[Tael_Spinner]

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As you write more and more, you will find it just becomes part of your ability.

That being said, take your time.