Director's Cut: Sunbutt, Moonbutt, SparkleButt, I Have Questions (E-Rated Version) · 2:37pm Sep 12th, 2019
With some comments saying the ending of the "original" version of "Sunbutt, Moonbutt, Sparklebutt, I Have Questions" story was a bit too silly, I thought I'll try again with a "E" rated version of it, which I gave a different ending to.
To make this story be more like its own story, I didn't only give it a different ending. In addition as changing the human OC name, I changed some of the questions he asked the Princesses, as well as changing some of Princess's reactions. Most notably was Luna's reaction to Larry asking how bad was things in Equestria before the Mane Six could "save the day" so much, if the crises and villain attacks were doing an "unheard" level of peace in Equestria.
In the "original" version, both Celestia and Luna got nervous at the question and said nothing. But in the "E" rated version, Luna looked at Celestia, like she was wondering about that too, and only Celestia started sweating.
As far as my stories go, this one didn't do bad at all (at the moment it has 14 likes and 6 dislikes). But my past few stories did better, or at the moment it seems like it. I think I might've made the ending of this one a bit too silly too. In which case, 0 for 2
One more reason to try to knock my next story out of the park.