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Firesight


I'm an IT Brony who writes stories based on a show for 8-year old girls whose content is meant for anything but 8-year old girls.

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  • 1 week
    Prereader verdict on new Midnight Rising chapter is in...

    And unfortunately, that verdict is unanimous:

    Complaints were: too meta, hard to follow, does nothing to advance the plot, and potentially makes things worse while trying to fix them.

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    7 comments · 154 views
  • 1 week
    Still waiting on Midnight Rising prereads...

    Which are particularly important this time, because the first preread I got back was negative. As it came from AJ_Aficionado, whose opinions I particularly value mostly because he’s more interested in the story than the sex, I tend to give what he said about it credence but still want to hear from everyone else before I start making changes to the new chapter.

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    1 comments · 95 views
  • 2 weeks
    Mind changed on removing the griffon arc from Midnight Rising + teaser

    After receiving pleas from multiple readers to keep the Enter the Griffon chapters in place, I have decided to do so and go with my original plan, which was to simply offer new readers the chance

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    4 comments · 127 views
  • 2 weeks
    One final thing...

    I have been advised by no less an authority than CHS acting Vice-Principal Ms. Cheerilee to use the upcoming Midnight Rising chapter as strictly a recap to relaunch the story, and not get into Lemon Zest until the following chapter, when I can devote a full entry to it without any split in focus. No, really. She did. You’ll see what I mean when the chapter launches, but basically, I’m

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    4 comments · 127 views
  • 3 weeks
    I have reached a decision on Midnight Rising...

    Thanks in part to one final comment that came to me over PM last night. It wasn't a mean comment. In fact, it was nothing but a simple, politely asked question from a reader I hadn't heard from before: do you have to read the griffon chapters to understand what comes after?

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Aug
7th
2019

The Best and the Worst hits 36 likes... · 12:24pm Aug 7th, 2019

Not great, not terrible. :twilightsmile:

In all seriousness, I think I mishandled the launch. I should have reserved some chapters to release later instead of all at once and with daily updates I might have been able to generate some more heat. It peaked at 6th on the heat list and might not have been too far from featuring. Ah well. It’s still a good story and I’m glad I wrote it. Thanks, those of you who read it, and those of you who haven’t read it are still invited to do so, as the comments have been uniformly positive. I’ll likely submit it for review later.

EThe Best and The Worst
Twilight Sparkle has seen some of the best of humanity during her visits to Earth. Now it is time she sees some of the worst...
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Comments ( 4 )

It's in my read later list. Do that's a + waiting in the wings.

The day you launched was very hostile. Not only was the competition strong it featured some of the biggest names on the site like Red Brony. Hell, one of the top stories was a destined-to-hit-number-one story about the Holocaust. That's like out Chernobyling Chernobyl as far as teaching ponies about humans stories go. This story stood zero chance of featuring, by no fault of your own to be sure.

As far as chapters in reserve go, Keep Him Busy employed that strategy better than any story I've ever seen. It's definitely something you want to use yourself, though A Gentleman's Price tried it and for whatever reason, it didn't work. I swear the front page didn't even update properly. Oh well...

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Appreciated! Hope you enjoy it when the time comes and look forward to hearing what you think of it.

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Yeah, the front page was quite hostile, and you warned me off publishing, but I was too anxious to get it out and had already promised to release it. Lesson learned. :ajsleepy:

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Thank you! :pinkiehappy: I consider the story a huge success to garner that kind of reaction. I'd appreciate if you leave a comment to that effect on the story proper to hopefully entice additional readers. And give the HBO series a watch sometime as well. It's not a perfect depiction by any stretch, but it's very compelling.

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