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Stallion of Steel


It's never as bad as it seems. In this world there is right and there is wrong, and that distinction is not difficult to make. You're much stronger than you think you are. Trust me.

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    Where've been part 2

    If it seems that I've been taking forever it's because I have. As I said in my last blog I was trying to make some changes in my life. Some are going okay, others not so okay. I failed my road test due to a simple mistake caused by a migraine. So now I have to take online courses and practice for 24 hours. Plus I'm trying out some new medication to help my migraines. It helps somewhat, but I have

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  • 61 weeks
    Where I've been.

    So it's been a while since I did any writing here. There are mainly three reasons for this.

    1. My depression. My depression has been rearing its ugly head again. Luckily I could locate a therapist nearby and schedule an appointment for a session.

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  • 71 weeks
    Legion of Superhero Characters.

    So one of the upcoming chapters will be based on its about time. After reading some feedback, I've decided this would be a place to introduce the Legion of Superheroes. The story will closely follow their debut in Adventure Comics #247 The heroes are to be presented as follows.

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  • 72 weeks
    Update: where I've been.

    It's been two...I think months since I last posted a chapter. I've kind of been busy with other things. Mostly work related. As well as dealing with a bit of writers block. I'll try to get Super Bloom part 2 finished this month. I promise.

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  • 92 weeks
    Comet Update.

    I'm writing this post to inform you that I've struggled to stay motivated with my writing lately. I've just been overwhelmed with everything that's happening in the world. I keep finding myself easily distracted by news stories and the things I used to do for fun, don't seem to elicit joy from me anymore. I thought at first it was because I was tired from working. But now I think I might be at

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Jul
15th
2019

Just an idea that popped into my head. · 6:45pm Jul 15th, 2019

So two months ago Brightburn dropped in theaters, and I didn't get around to seeing it. But the idea of a Superman horror movie is strange I'll give it that.

Well, I was working a chapter a few minutes ago where Kerax is talking to Comet about resynchronizing his parent's memories after Nightmare Moon corrupted them. And I got to thinking what if some essence of the Sands of Hyponos remained in Comet's mind, too weak to trap him in his dreams but still lingering in the back, waiting for a blast of dark magic to strengthen it enough to take over his mind.

In the waking world, the Black Sands christens itself as Nightburn. His coat is pitch black like Nightmare Moon and his mane and tail are starry as well. But whereas Nightmare Moon's was dark blue like the night sky, Nightburn's is red like a nebula. His eyes glow like a fiery red.

His costume consists of a black bodysuit with a red nebula shaped emblem on his chest depicting the letter N. A crimson red cape and hood hides his face except for his eyes which burn thru the darkness within. His hooves sport red boots similar to Nightmare Moon's.

Like an inverse of Comet, Nightburn draws his power from the moonlight. Every night he takes over Comet's mind and proceeds to terrorize Equestria, using his powers to stop anyone who stands up to him. Of course, unlike the movie, he doesn't actually kill or hurt anyone badly, but he causes a lot of damage and leaves everypony he encounters shaking with fear. Come the morning Comet is left not know what has happened only learning there is another super threat to Equestria that he has to stop. With every night, Nightburn grows stronger and more destructive asserting more control over Comet's actions during the day. He becomes more argumentive with the Apple Family and his friends and begins behaving more aggressively. His ultimate goal is to become strong enough to come out during the day and of course finish what Nightmare Moon started.

Ultimately it's going to take the efforts of the Elements of Harmony, Princess Luna and Comet himself trapped once again inside his mind to stop Nightburn.

So like I said this is just an idea I had, let me know what you think?

Comments ( 1 )

Actually, in addition to the loose basis on "Brightburn", this ALSO sounds like a good analogue to Ultraman (Superman's Crime Syndicate counterpart) with some elements of Bizarro (at least in the sense of being a Superman clone created by a villain). So I say, go for it.

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