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Firesight


I'm an IT Brony who writes stories based on a show for 8-year old girls whose content is meant for anything but 8-year old girls.

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  • Today
    Midnight Rising update; Feathered Hearts C&C teaser...

    Hey, folks. Here’s my weekly writing update. I’m tagging this as C&C since that’s what the teaser below is about, but the blog is about both it and Unleash the Magic - Midnight Rising.

    Unleash the Magic - Midnight Rising

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  • 1 week
    Prereader verdict on new Midnight Rising chapter is in...

    And unfortunately, that verdict is unanimous:

    Complaints were: too meta, hard to follow, does nothing to advance the plot, and potentially makes things worse while trying to fix them.

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  • 1 week
    Still waiting on Midnight Rising prereads...

    Which are particularly important this time, because the first preread I got back was negative. As it came from AJ_Aficionado, whose opinions I particularly value mostly because he’s more interested in the story than the sex, I tend to give what he said about it credence but still want to hear from everyone else before I start making changes to the new chapter.

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  • 2 weeks
    Mind changed on removing the griffon arc from Midnight Rising + teaser

    After receiving pleas from multiple readers to keep the Enter the Griffon chapters in place, I have decided to do so and go with my original plan, which was to simply offer new readers the chance

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  • 3 weeks
    One final thing...

    I have been advised by no less an authority than CHS acting Vice-Principal Ms. Cheerilee to use the upcoming Midnight Rising chapter as strictly a recap to relaunch the story, and not get into Lemon Zest until the following chapter, when I can devote a full entry to it without any split in focus. No, really. She did. You’ll see what I mean when the chapter launches, but basically, I’m

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Jul
9th
2019

Moving right along... · 6:35pm Jul 9th, 2019

I'm pleased to report a successful Nightmare Night chapter release that included a visit to the feature list! Welcome new readers, and thanks, everyone who commented! I admit I had some trepidation on publishing this one for the subject matter, but it seems to have worked out quite well.

As I have some momentum on Nightmare Night, I'll be continuing it, and I don't think I'm giving anything away to say that the main attraction and featured action in the next chapter will be the long-awaited confrontation between Starlight and Eclipse. But there will be some side action as well, and we'll check in with characters like Discord and Pinkamena. To say nothing of poor, put-upon and overlooked Trixie... :trixieshiftright:

With all major characters but Starlight and Trixie consumed and corrupted, we now have several alpha personalities, factions, and free agents floating around, and some friction between them is inevitable. And you can also expect that Sunset Shimmer and the Humane 6 won't remain ignorant of what's happening on the other side of the portal forever... :unsuresweetie:

As a final note, commenters on the latest chapter have said that they're actively rooting for the villains at this point, and I consider that flattery. It's been fun writing these characters, to say nothing of the scenes. It's nice to be able to cut loose once in a while, and just like the original Unleash the Magic, this story is an excellent excuse to do so. Look for the next chapter by the end of July, depending on a very in-flux work situation.

Comments ( 8 )

Awesome. Can't wait.

I'm curious should we still called it 'Nightmare Night'? Over 100K words and it is still not morning yet?

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Awesome. Can't wait.

Thanks! Updates will follow as more is written.

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I'm curious should we still called it 'Nightmare Night'? Over 100K words and it is still not morning yet?

Yes, because the story takes place entirely during Nightmare Night. It began at sunset and as currently planned, will end at sunrise. I haven’t stated the time, but it’s around 1:30am at this point of the story.

In my view, word count is not really a good measure of the passage of time. As an example, my current Firefly story (Into the Storm: The Flight of Firefly) took 160k words to get through a single day while its prequel (Before the Storm: The Rise of Firefly) used that same number of words to cover an entire year.

I'm still rooting for Trixie ans Starlight just to see how (if?) they get out if this mess.

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The answer will be known in the next chapter! Personally, I’ve always had a soft spot for Trixie, myself... :trixieshiftleft:

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