Third-person narrative in The Chosen One · 6:23pm Jul 8th, 2019
Guys, I can't take it anymore. I just can't.
I thought the first-person narrative would be good, but... It was not. The Chosen One should be a long time ago complete. But... I'm just sick of it. I don't wanna write it because of the first-person narrative.
The first-person narrative was my biggest mistake. I started to read Stephen King's books, like The Shining, Pet Sematary, and I'm gonna read his other books, like: IT, Doctor Sleep, Carrie and The Mist. I realized that the third-person narrative is just better. I can describe much more details, and build an awesome atmosphere. For example, that's why Her Little Demon has a good beginning. That's why HLD has so good atmosphere. The Chosen One hasn't from the WHOLE fucking beggining.
Now I wanna tell you that, the last chapters of Episode I will be finished with the third-person narrative. I'm sorry, but I see that's the best thing for this story. Next episodes will be written with this narrative too.
That's all for now, tell me in the comment what do you think about that, bye!