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A M Shark


The Shark is a mild fan of MLP who is writing an MLP version of a story she didn't like to see if she can do it "better" and wishes to share the results for critiques.

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  • 35 weeks
    Feeling Full of Thanks.

    Well, folks. Looks like it's that time of the year again, and this time around I just felt the need to share what I'm thankful for.

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  • 60 weeks
    The Boys are Back ... Or are they?

    Hey, everyone. I want to thank you all for being so patient with me regarding updates for The Pegasus who Kicked the Changelings' Hive. I had several real-life commitments in April and May that took away from my writing time, but I'm currently hard at work on the story, and wish to reward you with a tiny sneak peek at the beginning of Chapter 2.

    Chapter 2

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  • 85 weeks
    Two Down, One to Go

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  • 123 weeks
    We the Ponies (Didn't Start the Fire)

    Hello again, my followers.

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  • 154 weeks
    Regarding The Ponies who Played with Fire: It's Only Mostly Dead

    Hello everyone,

    First off, I want to thank everyone who left their reviews on Chapter 9. I was pretty curious to see how that one would go over for reasons you can probably guess if you read it, so I really appreciate your comments.

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Jun
8th
2019

The Boys are Back ... Or are they? · 1:51pm Jun 8th, 2019

Hey, everyone. I want to thank you all for being so patient with me regarding updates for The Pegasus who Kicked the Changelings' Hive. I had several real-life commitments in April and May that took away from my writing time, but I'm currently hard at work on the story, and wish to reward you with a tiny sneak peek at the beginning of Chapter 2.

Chapter 2

Beware of your friends; do not trust anyone in your clan. For every one of them is a deceiver, and every friend a slanderer."--Jeremiah 9:4


Almost immediately Fluttershy spotted what she was sure was a flaw in Skywishes's statement. "But what if some changelings followed the two of us when you first took me to the TreeHAB? What if they've been following you all these years the same way they've been following the rest of us?"

Skywishes grimaced. "I admit that's a possibility ... but after what just happened here, I think it's unlikely. If they know where the TreeHAB is, why didn't they just break into it while I was away and wait to ambush me when I got back, the same way they just tried to do with you here? Why try to capture me while I was still traveling through the forest?"

"I guess you have a point..." Fluttershy started to concede, then trailed off as another issue occurred to her. "But what about Highflyer and Screwjob?" Should they wait for the wrestlers to return, or try to get to the TreeHAB before any changelings returned? And that was not even taking into account the fact that one or both of the wrestlers might already have been caught, captured, or maybe even killed. She turned to the young unicorn next to her. "Dinky, have you seen any sign of either of them?"

Dinky lifted her ragged head. "No, I haven't seen any--"

Spike interrupted her by suddenly clearing his throat. "Looks like that might be about to change. At least where one of them is concerned." He pointed down at a valley near the cottage, and the four ponies looked in this direction to see a lumpy gray-green shape moving furtively across it. As the shape drew nearer, Fluttershy saw that it seemed to be a stained dirty blanket. And peeking cautiously out from under the blanket were at least two ponies: one with a cowpony hat and a blonde mane, and one with a jetty black mane, an equally black circle beard, and bandages over his left eye.

But how can we be sure that's really them? Fluttershy wondered.


To Be Continued...

Hang in there, folks. I'll have the rest of the chapter ready as soon as I can, so thanks again for your patience.

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Comments ( 3 )

I would wait for 18 years for an update dude, take yo time

Yeah the boys are back!:D Or are they?;) Lol;)

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*Chuckles* I'm honored that you're willing to wait that long, but I'm happy to report I just sent the completed version of this chapter to my editor, so it will likely be posted sometime this month.

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*Chuckles* We'll be finding out once I finish getting this chapter edited and posted.

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