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Torus


Just a blind brony who is wanting to be a good writer.

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  • 204 weeks
    The highlight of my day

    “Hungry is the man who finds salvation in a cookie.”

    Best fortun cookie ever.

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  • 206 weeks
    A sudden realization

    Guys, I’m going to be real with you for a moment, okay?

    I’ve lived as a bit of a sheltered life over my life of 23 years, and I don’t really understand on how the world really works. I have a slight learning disability, but many people have told me that I should’ve been in a regular classroom instead of a... slightly less challenging classroom setting, and the teachers didn’t help either.

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    2 comments · 189 views
  • 206 weeks
    I’m back!

    Guess who’s back, back again.

    Guys it’s been a hot minute since I last written or read a ponyfic, but I will try my best to give you guys something.

    So hang on tight cause it’s going to be a bumpy ride.

    2 comments · 159 views
  • 248 weeks
    Old and possibly crappy stories

    Okay, I’m pretty sure you guys know about fimfetch, that site that catalogs every single pony story here. Anyways, I found some of my old crap for when I was Hatfield123, but mostly only the titles and descriptions.

    Oh man did those descriptions sound terrible. I mean, there was one story where Vynal was a vampire, and was the mother of Sweetie Belle...

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    0 comments · 210 views
  • 249 weeks
    Better then I was yesterday

    Hey guys, this isn’t going to be a normal post, then again, I hardly make a blog on this site. Anyways, I’ve came to a realization, a realization by God the all mighty that i’m a lying, selfish, angry man who deserves nothing of the things that I have been given.

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    3 comments · 219 views
Jun
1st
2019

Audio review number 1 · 5:45pm Jun 1st, 2019

So, I decided to start review mlp fanfics. I know a lot of authors have or already do this. However, the reviews I’m going to do are going to be based around audio readings of fanfics. The reason why I decided to do audio readings is because I feel more immersed in such things. Like being creeped out or laughing my ass off.

Now, what that means for me is that I’m going to have a lot more then simply reviewing a simple story, I’m also going to review audio quality, sound effects if they have any, music, and voice acting.

Note, I’m not saying that the VAs aren’t good, they just may need a better mike or something like that.

With that out of the way, our first contender is... The symbiot, by SpyroForLife, read by Mr. Snarky.

Honestly, I actually found this on accident while I was browsing YouTube for another story.

First, the story. A little fast pace for my taste, but very enjoyable. I was on the edge of my seat the entire four part series.

The audio at times was a bit off, and he would occasionally mess up a word once or twice, but nothing too distracting. The voices he used would sometimes sound the same between specific characters, and the voice effect for venom wouldn’t be there, just a weird voice that took me a bit to realize that it was venom.

In short, it was okay, a better microphone would be advised, make sure you read the story before reading, or at least read the story out loud to prevent mistakes, and make sure your effects are in place before using them, give them a bit of a test run.

Now the music. Oh... man... sometimes the music would be a bit too loud. Other times he would have music that didn’t feel like it’d fit in the story. Hell, he used the Avengers end game theme for the climax. Please, for the sake of your listeners, pick the appropriate music for your story.

Conclusion...

The reading was an okay, good, but needs a slight bit more improvement.

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