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  • 7 weeks
    The heraldry of Ravenclaw

    Once upon a time Heraldry had been a hobby of mine.

    OK, so this bit of rambling was inspired by speculation about the Ravenclaw heraldic blazon. Originally the shield was described as a bronze eagle on a blue field.

    Blue and gold? Or is it blue and brown? Not to mention considerable division as to if it's an eagle or a raven.

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  • 8 weeks
    What did I write?

    OK, so I'm reading through an abandoned story when I find this:

    “Do you know how to use a toilet?”

    “Ah, you sit, do yer business, and then pull the leaver.”

    “Which one?”

    “Which one?” Cirrus had never heard of a toilet with more than one lever on it. Looking at what she presumed to be the toilet found that it looked a bit like a captains chair with multiple buttons.

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  • 9 weeks
    What links the Deathly Hallows.

    OK, so I was watching a video on fan theories and thought I'd share one of my comments here. One theory is that Harry's Invisibility Cloak was a piece of the Veil... which really makes no sense to my way of thinking. They were also speculating on the connection between the three hallows.

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  • 10 weeks
    Chapters ready to go so far...

    As of this morning there are 12 chapters ready to go.

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  • 21 weeks
    Agent's of Discord

    Finished and posted up to the end of Book One of the Harry Potter series.

    I will not be starting a new book/sequel at this time. All future posts will be added to Agents of Discord. Coming up, Summer Vacation, and what a vacation it's going to be.

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May
9th
2019

Grammar app · 10:35pm May 9th, 2019

I've downloaded a browser app from Grammarly.

To be honest I've mixed feelings about it. It gives a choice between American, UK, Australia, and Canadian English. Right off hand, I'd say my style is closer to International English thanks to the shareware word processor I'm using. Most of my spelling is American, so I figured I'd go with American. Suddenly it doesn't know what a Prefect is. It keeps insisting I change 'Prefect' to 'perfect'. :facehoof:

Overall it looks like it can be a good tool for that final edit... when it's not crashing, and/or being temperamental. It doesn't like ['ve] insisting I use 'have' every time, or ['d] insisting I use 'had' and doesn't seem to like the Oxford comma. Sometimes. Downright hates the Shatner comma. Yes, I tend, to use, a lot, of commas. I use them more like musical notation. The downside is it causes the app to have fits.👾 The plus side is that the app is really good at highlighting wrong words. I had McGonagall spelled wrong all over the place and hadn't noticed. >.< Piece versus peace, then versus than, strait versus straight, and a variety of other words. When it's not crashing it's a good tool. I'm finding it can't seem to handle files over five thousand words very well. The longer the file the more likely the app will crash, and seems to prefer a very formal writing style.

Now that I've gotten all that out of the way, yes, I spent the better part of the week editing the PIH posts that are already up. So unless I have a wave of inspiration and manic energy hit me, there probably isn't going to be an update this week. I dread the idea of going back through my older stuff.

Comments ( 5 )

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I'm finding that a lot of my issues are really basic stuff, like using a full stop where it should be a comma, and in some cases too many commas. Overall I'm not seeing huge problems. Heaven knows I've seen far worse than my feeble attempts at writing on this site. :twilightsheepish:

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Hopefully, they still are. :trollestia:

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