Well chapter went up early, so might as well do this thing. · 7:36am Apr 22nd, 2019
Chapter 20 was the originally meant to be the end of part two of Last of the Dark Ponies, until I changed things around so the story is now only in two parts instead of three. Anyway we close in on the ending, next chapter we return to the rescue team, they are closing in but Sombra knows they are coming. Will they succeed? Will they fail?
Well, you'll just have to continue to read to find out.
Just be forewarned that things may not end as you think. Things may not be as they seem.
Huh, now why did I post that video?
Foreshadowing? Red Herring? Me just being silly?
You'll find out.
Edit: I have also added a special disclaimer to the long description of the story, warning about the heavy topic of bisexuality and the heavily implied male/male sexual interaction, this is something I should have had on the story from the start, but for some reason or another failed to do so. I apologize if people who are not comfortable reading about such subjects, went into the story not knowing about this.
I have to admit, I just am very detached when it comes to things like this, we just approach this subject matter so differently where I come from. I did use to put up similar disclaimers on my TMNT stories, but didn't really feel that strong need to here due to the tagging system. However, I might just restart this practice as I've become better aware that my stories do sometimes clash a little with cultural values of others.
Seriously, chapter 20 used to be a lot more raunchy before I had my editor take a look at it. She actually had to spell it out to me what I couldn't do if I wanted to maintain the T rating, I'm that clueless about this stuff due to where I come from.
I always expect that with your stories but I really like a straight foward story (with a sequel or two)that doesn´t lose its tension by being unneccesarily long.
Me: is driven to read the entire chapter again but now imagines all the possible things that could have happened and is now thinking even more´raunchy´ than Askre probably intended
Less is more, I guess...
At least your only thinking them...I actually started writing something that stumbles (or will when I get to that part) firmly into that territory I warned him away from...and that is from the end of a scene in his sequel to this story
...now to find a way to talk him into giving me permission to play in that universe with R rated material...shhhh don't tell him until I figure a way to talk him into it, but only after I finish it up...uhhh...oops
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Talk me into it? I let you write that story where you had Private as Sombra's full on comfort colt. You had my permission a long time ago.
Seriously, nobody needs my permission, just credit my characters and I'm fine. I got a lot of fan fics of my fan fics when writing my TMNT Assassin fan fic series.
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As a friend from the TMNT community once said to me. "Askre, you're a sick twisted evil bastard. Even the light at the end of the tunnel might be a speeding train." I'm paraphrasing of course, but yeah, hehehe just they wait Just they wait. Meheheheheheheeeeeeee
Ooooh I wouldn't have minded you publishing the other one. But hey, won't mind this one either.
Yeah, Temor is more vocal, more outgoing. Private is far more subtle most of the time.
As for Dark Pony Sombra, he's a walking thesaurus, I personally just keep in mind that he's from 1000 years ago, from a culture that just views these kind of things so differently.
If I ever get inspired with an idea to write something, I might do something. That's the problem with stories, you need an idea first.