CatergoricalGrant:Mane six cuddle simulator,introduction&princess twilight sparkles

NOTE: I am only going to critic stories/fanfic and clopfics on the first day of the week although the actual fist day of the week is Sunday so i mean every Monday and i should release my mlp fanfic i wrote before or after season 4 so i hope you like it when i release it on Thursday so i will see you then

Hello guys i am story charmer a writer and some what critic and to the i am judging Catergoricalgrant fan fiction the mane six cuddle simulator it is a interesting it is no different from the other anonymous fanfic but one thing about is that the genre tags that i do know are more personal to the writer than to us as a easy and simple explanation of the fanfic to us most are completely on relevant i am not saying they don't give good insight on the story it self but are most really necessary i know as most of you are reading this you probably think i am an asshole for insulting one of your so called beloved "mlp fanfic" i understand but i am simply telling you the truth but if you do not believe me read every word carefully and look at the genre tags and tell me if i am wrong in fact here are genre tags them self right here (mlp fim,comedy,slice of life ,second person,human,spike,trixie, starlight glimmer, self insert) but if i am wrong call me an asshole but that is only the tip of the iceberg.

Another one is that i find the story a big random thing at most to me and dose not go well with the show whole theme as i am sure most of you have seen for those that haven't it at the part he explains twilight is hoping but to be honest have we ever known the twilight sparkles the sister of shining Armour, student of Celestia , princess of friendship and the element of harmony to hop okay maybe but it is only at a point of complete joy and happiness but i guess you can take it as a alternate universe but a little less alternate but as we are in the 8 season of mlp i think it should be considered and i guess she could be happy because of her friend begin-around and seeing anon but either then that i don't see anything else wrong with the introduction and any other part of the story except.

The next continuation to the story i am sure as you go along reading most of you get the idea that anon is going to have sex with one of the but as you go along you find anon as a uhm lets go with a womanizer or should i say marenizer but enough with what i think is a alliteration but it is true and you think that the others will hear this but they do not but all i am saying is that i just think there should be a little more reality to it all though it was pretty explanatory and kind of funny as he does the same to the others but again this only what i think about the story but if i was to rate the story i would give it 3 gems and 2 bits