Writing Style Change · 6:26pm Apr 6th, 2019
hi everypony
this is no april fools this time so um resintly i had a talk with my parents um i showed them my stories and asked them wat they thot but um they were actually prety unhappy they told me the topics were too inapporpiate for somepony my age but i still dont want to quit so i want to try something new at least for a little bit
even though i think my ideas are good and original, i guess maybe i am going to try writing about ideas more relevant to the show at least for a story or two the only problem is i have never actually watched MLP so i will need time to watch the show first but that is it for now i might not release another story for a while but i hope u all continue to enjoy my other stories in the mean time
please don't write porn anymore
Bueno.
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In all seriousness though,
Even I wrote a story. And it has 12 likes and 1 dislike...
Although your stories are actually really funny, they're also pretty bad.
Why did you write stuff about MLP when you've never watched the show? That'd be like me writing a fanfic about The Pacific!
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He/she's loves a show he/she's never watched?
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How?
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I have no idea.
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I wouldn't attempt to write about something I didn't know.
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I know enough about MLP to write story. It currently has 12 likes and 1 dislike.
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Why we talking like people with poor knowledge of english?
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I have no idea...
again.
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I not want to sound like Russian.
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Da.
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Nice to see that wasn't perceived as offensive.
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If I’m being honest here. I haven’t seen very much of it but I’ve at least watched it before
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I mainly stick to Equestria Girls, to be honest.
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same
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Ooh. That's interesting.
Please, forgive me for showing up randomly... but are you a ten-years-old, who wrote... ! Is that a "Porn" tag I spot ?!
...No, you had better be kidding . It is not even right (heck, screw the legality of it!) for an immature child to be on the Internet! Why, I didn't discover the joy of Web search until the age of 15,5! 15,5, Carl! Nor would I have durst even to try to begin to think of porn, much less actually to muster boldness to fixate the lewd acts on the medium! If you really are a child, then... Well... .
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Correction:
Please don't write ANYTHING ever again. And leave the site, to boot.
FFS why are you even here if you haven't watched the show? And how could you be stupid enough to show your parents your porn stories and think they'd NOT react badly?
You basically just confirmed you're too young to even be on the site writing NORMAL fics, there's no way you're 13.
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i am hear because i love my little pony and sonic silly!!! my teacher told me to always persue my dreams and never give up
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How can you love something if you've never seen it? Not to mention, this isn't really the place to go to get your Sonic jollies.
Regardless of that, dozens of people have given you plenty of good advice, myself included, and you refuse to follow it to better yourself as a writer.
Serious question: how old are you, actually?
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i have begun watching!!! also um sorry my parents say never tell my age on the internet especially to strangers
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If you're under 13, you're not allowed here. Says right in the site rules you need to be at least that old to have an account. And the way you're talking....you're definitely under 13.
Get out of here.
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silly you can't judge a book by its cover!!! i could be 40 years old!!!
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Protip: if you're going to insinuate you're of adult age, don't do it after stating you're still in school at an age where you parents dictate how much you focus on your studies.
You have got to be joking. You literally showed your parents your stories? Are you that idiotic? You’re in middle school, and you actually write...that? Why are you writing all of this if you are this young? Oh wait, that’s a stupid question to even ask to everyone who’s reading this. Sorry guys.
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I defiantly feel you man. I tried to give this guy advice too, but little did I know, I was idiotic to believe I would help. I wasted my time trying to help him, and he just thinks he can do this like the back of his hand. I have no idea how he learned this at such a young age. But him saying he’s in school in a couple of his blogs from what I’ve seen so far. Yup, he really is in school. Probably not even in high school yet. I’ve never read a single of his stories, but thank god the comments paint a picture that tells me to not read it. (I like reading the comments on his stories. lol.)
This guy’s nothing but a troll is all I have to say, sadly.
I don't know if this is just trolling or not but, regardless, in case, I hope you are okay. Also if you want to keep writing and learning maybe try seeing if you can read some other stories and learn from them a bit? Or read up on some writing tips? It always helps to just keep improving and definitely never give up on your dreams. Good luck! :)
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I don't know if you really have the authority to be telling anyone to get off this site.
You've got to be kidding me
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If you're that reluctant to change your ways, I suggest you go stand in front of a highway or something.