Spring Cleaning Part 2: Project Orion · 8:13am Mar 26th, 2019
Well here we are again, but this time it's actually officially Spring!
So what's new:
Each chapter has been combed through and adjusted to flow better. The story line is more or less the same, however some key details have been fleshed out, expanded upon, and generally cleaned up to fit the overall narrative better. In particular Silver Eclipse's motivations have been fleshed out (leading to one of my new favorite bits of dialogue: his little fear/future fueled monologue in chapter 2) and the Oasis project is generally viewed by him as an interesting, but not particularly viable idea. The bulk of the new updates are in chapters 1 and 2, however each chapter has had something modified in it.
Upcoming news: Departures will likely go on hiatus in about 2 months coinciding with a pretty big moment in the story. That's about 8 more chapters up until that point, and about 8-10 more following those once the hiatus is up. It shouldn't last long, a couple weeks at most (but hey, it could be a lot shorter as well!)