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Surprise's Backstory · 7:00am Mar 23rd, 2019

Greetings... from your messed up neighborhood author Venomblast!

I have had a few people come to me and ask about Surprise. Her backstory, where she came from... yadda yadda... so being the author I am, I go into heavy detail about it and make up this whole story that's honestly too complicated to keep explaining or completely put it in my story The Strongest Element of All. As you know she is a warlord and a cyborg and was artificially created. But I honestly don't think people understand how deep that actually goes, and how messed up she is because of it.

How did she get her annihilation system? Why does she go berserk at random times? Why did Athena say she was on the path of evil, when in the story she just seems like a big 'ol teddy bear. Well first of all, the story is rated "Teen" so I cannot exactly show her full psychotic side with her murderous instincts.

So needing to practice a short story, I have decided to publish her backstory. It is finished and going through the editing stage, but will be posted in the next three days. Now LISTEN!

My stories have always been reader friendly without any tags or trigger warnings, but I cannot stress this enough!

Surprise's story WILL be mature!

When I say mature I mean it, the tags will be as followed, Gore (I mean come on... she's a sadistic super soldier what do you expect) Violence, Alternate Universe, and yes DEATH.

Her story will be about her origin, and her life, all wrapped up in five chapters only. You will see how she was created, born, infused with technology, and the doomsday brought on her planet. This is NOT a happy story, this is NOT meant for someone looking for a feel good, and this will not leave you feeling content. Her backstory is not for the light hearted, it is dark, terrible and abusive... helping my readers understand how far she has come and how important Pinkamena is to her mentality.

This is Sci-Fi to the extreme, every single explanation I tried my hardest to explain, but do understand not everything can be detailed like my other stories since I have to watch my word count. I am aiming for thirty thousand words tops, which will be a challenge for me... but I am hoping this will improve my skills as a writer. This I am going to warn you again, IS NOT a feel good story.

Thank you for reading, and if you are curious about Surprise's origin I implore you to read it... but ONLY if you can withstand gore stories. There will be several warnings on the story itself, if people do not read this blog... but I am still going to warn anyways.

Other than that, I'll keep you wondering... hope to see you around cheers!

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Comments ( 11 )

I'm gonna have a good time reading this

This caught my attention for certain.


I dunno man, this story is probably the darkest thing I have ever written. Even darker than Pinkamena's past...

I apologize :rainbowlaugh:

Glad it caught your attention, hope to see some feedback once it comes out!

I've read darker stuff than that so I can take it. Fallout Equestrian Murky Number Seven will make you feel like you lost all of your family and friends. It's that dark but it was still one of the best stories I've read personally.

That's exactly why I'm gonna love it!:pinkiehappy:

I have had my hands full but hopefully they will be less full by that time


Is now a BaD tImE to mention it has been posted? :rainbowlaugh:


Gee... you do not even have to read it, I am not trying to make it seem like you have to! Hahaha! Get to it when you want, or not at all... completely up to you!

I never said you were
I'll try to make time for it soon.

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