Chapter 6 Rewrite

It's been about a month since I posted Chapter 6 of Roseluck's Realization, and to put it simply, I'm not satisfied at all with how it turned out. Work on Chapter 7 has already begun, but I'm going to be back-tracking and doing a rewrite of Chapter 6, to help iron out the edges and provide more narrative.

A chapter that is barely over 1,000 words is unacceptable in a story like this, and I apologize for putting it out when it wasn't the best it could be.

Hopefully the rewrite will be out tonight, but tomorrow is more likely. We'll see, though!

Comments

[D48]

I can't see it now, but I seem to remember writing a substantial comment giving advice on that chapter so hopefully that's helping you with the cleanup.

[Lucky Seven]

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Yep! I've made copies of all my critiques, and I'm gonna use them to work on it.

[D48]

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I'm glad I was able to help.