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  • 73 weeks
    It's ali~ive!

    It was a long slog, but Pony Predators of Equestria is finally ready to be re-uploaded!

    By and large, things haven't changed too much, and not as much as I was originally aiming for, but I still like where it ended up. The short version of the main changes being:

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    3 comments · 525 views
  • 127 weeks
    On Hiatus again

    So, as the title says, Pony Predators of Equestria is on hiatus again. It isn't dead by a long shot, and I do fully intend to start updating with new chapters again, however one thing that's become unfortunately apparent to me is that the story in its current form is just not sustainable for me to keep writing. There's simply too much going on for me to keep track of it all, too many plot

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    4 comments · 561 views
  • 154 weeks
    Downvotes/Dislikes on comments

    So, there has been a tendency of posts that are critical or questioning on aspects of chapters to all get a downvote/dislike. Whoever's doing that, could you please stop? I know it doesn't really matter, and "points" or "likes" or whatever aren't counted towards anything on fimfiction, but please save the dislikes for people who are actually being rude or insulting, rather than just asking a

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    2 comments · 249 views
  • 162 weeks
    Fimfiction's word count

    What is the world does fimfiction count as a word? I finished writing Chapter 24.33 in Libre Office, which gave the word count as ~6600 words. Then I uploaded the chapter here, and suddenly it's getting counted as over 7300 words. I'm just... so confused :pinkiecrazy:

    3 comments · 300 views
  • 173 weeks
    100+ likes!

    Pony Predators of Equestria recently gained over 100 net likes!

    0 comments · 245 views
Feb
12th
2019

It's ali~ive! · 7:07am Feb 12th, 2019

It was a long slog, but Pony Predators of Equestria is finally ready to be re-uploaded!

By and large, things haven't changed too much, and not as much as I was originally aiming for, but I still like where it ended up. The short version of the main changes being:
1) Everything related to Cloudsdale is gone. It isn't that I didn't like it - a lot of it I actually thought was pretty funny - but it was taking time and words to keep continuing something that was entirely tangential to what was supposed to be the main plot.
2) The changelings are going to play a much smaller role in the story, though they aren't gone entirely like I originally planned - removing them entirely would have ended up making the story a lot more boring and, I think, just worse. Instead, now Fluttershy isn't revealed as a changeling, and Cheerilee and Bon Bon leave Ponyville to go talk to their queens, and so they won't be taking part any further in the current story. If I have the time and motivation to make the sequel though, that would focus on them and changelings in general.
3) Everything going forward. Bits and pieces I will probably re-use, but the direction the story will go is different from what I had originally planned with the first version of the story, with the added bonus that I now actually have an idea of what the ending might be and how I'll get there.

Chapters will be uploaded one per day until I get through what I'm keeping from the first version of the story, and then after that it's just however long it takes for me to get back into the swing of writing new stuff again.

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Comments ( 3 )

Awesome, I've been waiting for this :pinkiehappy:

all that trouble to rewrite it...and now its left to langish once again

*sadface*

it was so good too...

How did I miss this?!

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