I have noticed in my time on fimfiction that comments only happen a few rare times even when you ask people for them. It seems odd to me but it doesn't really matter I guess. Just wanted to do a little rant about it. And now its over. Thank you and have a good night.
Alright not sure who may actually even read this but here goes. I started talking with another member on this site and decided that my writing can be better and I wasn't taking the time to ensure the story was clear and well defined in an orderly manner. So I am going to start de publishing chapters and may deplublish the whole story in order to reword and rework it in a better fashion so it goes