To summarize the story TD the Alicorn Princess. The result I got was... interesting.
Fimfiction story: This story involves Peter Westmoore, a responsible college student, who is transported to the magical land of Equis and transformed into an alicorn princess named TD. He faces challenges adapting to his new life and ruling his nation.
As many of you well know, I'm a father of three. A four-year-old, a two-year-old, and a one-year-old. It's pretty great. Can be difficult, but overall a pretty big blessing. How my wife takes care of three kids five days a week is beyond me, as I have a hard time taking care of them two days a week when my wife goes off to work.
Yes, I'm calling out for editors again. I want to submit a story to the Cozy Glow contest, and I want to make sure that the story I just wrote for it is good, or "wow, that's a jumbled mess of ideas, far too mean, and the ending is terrible."
Let me know if you'd like to help. Any extra eyes would be highly appreciated.
4989484 I read that hint and then read the comic again. For a simple concept, you don't pick it up unless you take in the entire picture. Selective attention is real.
Don't feel to bad. One thing I never got from Calvin and Hobbes as a kid was every time Calvin always talked into some deep philosophy discussion with Hobbies, while in his little wagon, going at screaming 900 MPH speeds! Then just to crash on the last panel, just as they conclude their debate.
DEAR LORD okay i got THREE interpretations about WHAT the joke was The First was that because Hobbs is 'imaginary' Calvin Knows what hand he has...but that wasn't it The Second is that Calvin Can see the cards because they are facing His direction... i was fairly certain because the card Do have a Black and white side; the first panel shows that the cards have that. The THIRD which is the actual thing is A SECRET
This reminds me of a riddle a friend of mine told me that took him and his brother an entire year to figure out. The riddle went something like this: "An old retired sea captain went to a diner and sees albatross soup on the menu. He remarks to the waitress that the only time he had albatross soup was when him and his crew were stranded on a desert island, and he quite enjoyed the taste. Feeling nostalgic, he orders it, but after taking a single bite, he immediately stands up and commits suicide. Why?" Like I said, my friend and his brother took a year to figure this out. I told it to another friend and it took him like a minute to figure out that the answer was that the soup he ate on the island was not albatross soup, but the remains of his fallen crew, and he killed himself because he enjoyed the taste of human flesh.
The worst poker face.
Took me a sec, lol
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I don't think it's his poker face that's the problem.
I don't get it.
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I read that hint and then read the comic again. For a simple concept, you don't pick it up unless you take in the entire picture. Selective attention is real.
4989486 Well he did catch a tiger by the tail.
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Look at the tail, especially the 3rd panel.
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OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOHHH!! Now I know how you feel BronyWriter.
Don't feel to bad.
One thing I never got from Calvin and Hobbes as a kid was every time Calvin always talked into some deep philosophy discussion with Hobbies, while in his little wagon, going at screaming 900 MPH speeds! Then just to crash on the last panel, just as they conclude their debate.
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Count the number of ball passes people in the white shirts do to the ball.
Oooh! I thought this whole time it was because he was playing both sides of the game.
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okay i got THREE interpretations about WHAT the joke was
The First was that because Hobbs is 'imaginary' Calvin Knows what hand he has...but that wasn't it
The Second is that Calvin Can see the cards because they are facing His direction... i was fairly certain because the card Do have a Black and white side; the first panel shows that the cards have that.
The THIRD which is the actual thing is A SECRET
...OH I GET IT.
The tail was the tell!
Yeah, took me a while too.
....................ha
...I don’t get it
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Third panel.
And yeah, don't feel bad. Like I said: it took me 20 years. I've been reading C&H since I was in Kindergarten.
This reminds me of a riddle a friend of mine told me that took him and his brother an entire year to figure out. The riddle went something like this: "An old retired sea captain went to a diner and sees albatross soup on the menu. He remarks to the waitress that the only time he had albatross soup was when him and his crew were stranded on a desert island, and he quite enjoyed the taste. Feeling nostalgic, he orders it, but after taking a single bite, he immediately stands up and commits suicide. Why?" Like I said, my friend and his brother took a year to figure this out. I told it to another friend and it took him like a minute to figure out that the answer was that the soup he ate on the island was not albatross soup, but the remains of his fallen crew, and he killed himself because he enjoyed the taste of human flesh.