Pardon the bit of dust (Part 5) · 2:52am Dec 16th, 2018
Hello everypony, ScarFox9700 here,
The time has come to go back through "Beyond the Express", and like the stories before it, fix ALL of the mistakes!
And while I'm doing this, there are 2 things that I want to set straight once and for all. First of all, the biggest goof in ALL of "Beyond the Express". Leopard's wings. Ever since "Battleship Express", I've said that his wings were black and feathery, just like the wings of a Pegasus. However, at some point midway through "Beyond the Express", Leopard suddenly gained the wings of a Bat-Pony, and then they go back to being feathery again! How did that happen?! Answer, it doesn't! Once and for all, Leopard's wings are black and feathery! They are the wings of a Pegasus, NOT a Bat-Pony! This sets him apart from them!
The second mistake involves Leopard's Sphinx, Briana. Yes, I KNOW that I spelled her name "Breana", and said that she WASN'T the Sphinx from "Daring Done". However, after thinking this over again, this is simply not the case. I've decided to spell her name "Briana", and yes, she IS the Sphinx from "Daring Done!" I'll explain about this more in the story, but it's a simple fix. She found the Lunar Shrine of Romance after being defeated by Sonambula, and she was punished for stealing the crops of those villagers being being trapped inside of the shrine until someone, or somepony solved her riddle; the riddle of who she really was. Also, her fur is purple, NOT blue! And while she no longer wears her Egyptian-style headdress, makeup, and jewelry, her mane is pink, and she takes very good care of it.
Now that I've cleared up these 2 big mistakes, I'll get to work on the rest. Keep your eyes open for "Pardon the bit of dust (Part 6)", which will indicate that I'm done with "Beyond the Express".
