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Phoenix Nebula


Chaos is not the opposite of Harmony but apart of it. Both chaos and order together create a balance known as Harmony. Without one you cannot have have the other and without either there is nothing.

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  • 186 weeks
    What would make you cry.

    I'm talking about like something in a story? What would make you, as a reader, legitimately cry? For me have a very loved character die would be the best way to make me cry, or maybe something else tragic. Then again it doesn't have to be a sad cry it could be tears of joy, maybe seeing a character have a come back from a near defeat or even come back to life defying death it self.

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    8 comments · 296 views
  • 195 weeks
    Immortaly =/= sadness

    This is one thing that constantly irritates me about Immortal Twilight stories, they always have Twilight become super miserable and depressed, or delve into dark magic to revive her friends. I get it's sad to lose friends, but what erks me is that this isn't a thing exclusive to immortal beings, last October my Grandfather died of cancer, my dog died about a month ago, my childhood doctor died

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    14 comments · 377 views
  • 198 weeks
    No Mane 6 in M&M

    Like the title says I've decided to forget about having the rest of the mane 6 in the story I'm struggling to much with trying to write them in a way that doesn't have them appear as flat, 2-dimensional characters. So yeah no mane six in their place I'll try and add other characters that don't have much in the way of personality that I can just build from scratch for the most part, like

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    17 comments · 586 views
  • 199 weeks
    Moon and Magic is not dead!

    Like the title says! I have not abandoned M&M and I don't ever plan to, I unfortunately, had to cancel Imperfect due to issues in my personal life, but M&M has no ties to my Personal life so it's safe and will be continued. I haven't been able to continue it do to life still because well I have to work so my bank account is not 0 and I have other projects that I'm working on. One of these

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    6 comments · 437 views
  • 207 weeks
    My Favorite Story and the One I want to continue the most.

    Redemption of a Broken mare.

    Okay, there's my favorite, bye!

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    27 comments · 449 views
Dec
15th
2018

Moon and Magic Chapter 3 · 11:07pm Dec 15th, 2018

Well, that didn't take me long to finish. I was able to write the last 700 words in about an hour. Again the chapter isn't very long; only around 1400 words, but then again I've only spent a total of three hours working on it so... yeah. I just need it edited and as I'm typing this post my editor is not available... so I either need to wait for him to be available or... I can do this:

I could use a second editor PM if you wish to edit my stories. Also, everyone who offered to preread my stories send me your email so I can share the document for chapter three as well as chapter 3 and 4 of Imperfect. Remember prereaders don't go spoiling it for others and thank you for the help!

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Comments ( 5 )

The only thing I can help you with is spelling so....

4981670
Eh, most of the issue is with grammar.

4981671
Might not be able to help you then.

Would be able to take on a second story editing grammar but can't guarantee all mistakes would be caught first time. Usually get most to all that interrupt casual reading though.

I could lend a hoof. I tend to call myself a proofreader more than an editor, and always happy to help

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