Dec
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2018
Spolder ideas...? · 7:25am Dec 6th, 2018
Does anybody have any suggestions on what I should do for a Spike x Smolder story? I have a rough draft of a story where Smolder blackmails Spike into changing her grades and becoming her sex partner, but I'm not sure as the nature of this tale seems a little mean-spirited. I know you all have your reasons for telling me to work on this myself, but I'm just trying to see what new things I can do with my favorite characters in my stories. Still, if you have anything to say in the comment section down, don't be shy on your thoughts. Thank you all for your time and I'll see you on the other side.
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GhoulDash97 · 256 views
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Spike takes gems for sex, Smolder gets a new pet.
Hey...always good to try out new stuff...is it a bit mean spirited...eh sure but hey if you can work it than work...if you can't at least you gave it a try.
You can always have it START mean-spirited, then have their relationship develop into something meaningful.
I would suggest jotting down a rough idea of A to B, maybe involve something of Smolder coaxing Spike with things 'are you a REAL dragon' etc,
I have an idea of my own Spike and Smolder fic, but that's an AU idea, their both students, and that's all I am sharing.
Basically figure out the story you want to tell, given the premis you have provided ask and answer for yourself some the following questions and maybe a few more:
How does Smolder notice Spike is drawn to her?
Why does Smolder see this as a chance to have a grades bumped up?
What does Spike see in Smolder?
Why he is no long chasing Rarity?
How does Smolder set-up to blackmail Spike?
What are the consequences to Spike and their severity if it's revealed he's exchanging intimacies with Smolder?
What sparks Smolder's face-turn?
Can Spike trust her?
Does she give Spike a reason to trust her?
Does Spike forgive her?
Do they get together for real in the end?
And of course, a rough idea of how each question is answered in the narrative.
There are many more questions you'll have to ask and answer yourself, but these are a starting point.