Help Please? · 1:33am Dec 6th, 2018
I really need some feedback on a story I'm trying to write. I'ts a crossover between MLP, and my Pokemon Mystery Dungeon story. It was a One-shot called "The Life Debts", you should be able to find it on Fanfiction.net
The Report (more or less the first chapter)
The Proposal (it's not what you're thinking)
Neither of these are near full completion, but I could use any and all feedback you can give me, positive or otherwise.