The Fabled Warrior Rework? · 11:21pm Nov 15th, 2018
So for some time now, since I put The Fabled Warrior on hiatus, I've been mulling over the story. I put the story on hiatus in the first place because of school. But as time went on, I started to think about the story. Ever since I started the second season of The Fabled Warrior, I've lost sight of where I wanted to take the story. The last chapter made that clear to me; when I had an entirely didn't path I wanted to take that chapter, I'm not sure why I didn't take that path in the first place. Then when I look back at a few of the early chapters, I think I miss where I wanted to take the story. Sure everything isn't so bad, and I probably could pick up where I left off, but the more I think about it, the more I wish to scrap and rewrite it completely. Take it an entirely different way. I'm not sure how my readers of The Fabled Warrior would feel about me canceling it and rewriting it. So I'm going to ask all my faithful readers of The Fabled Warrior as well as my other readers what you all think. I'm still going to take time to mull over it; I want to be a hundred percent certain about canceling and rewriting The Fabled Warrior before I begin the adventure. I might start test writing the new story and seeing if I like it or not.
Honestly, if you feel it is for the better just re-write it.
I've seen a few stories (can't recall from the top of my head since it's been too long from since i read them) that succumbed from lack of a path, so go ahead.
I agree
If you decide to rewrite it, then that's ok. I can live with it. Maybe delete the chapters up until the point you feel that it's the part when it took a different path. I just have one thing to say. Please keep Moon, White Claw, and Chi in the storyline. I just love their designs and personality.
That's the only thing I'd like to stay. Anyways thx for your story and I look forward to when your back to writing chapters. Ps The Fabled Warrior is my top favourite story. 
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Yeah, I knew it would hurt you the most if I decided to cancel The Fabled Warrior and do a rewrite. I can assure you that I do plan to keep White Claw, Chi and Moon Star. But you have no worries as I'm still mulling over it, and I plan on writing out the rewrite and see how I like it. If I find I enjoy parts of both, I might delete and rewrite specific chapters.
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If you do, I would be honored to proof read any of the rewrite you do and give you my honest opinion. But knowing those 3 will still be in your story sets me at ease. I do also love Flame but I know hes part of the main cast.
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Thanks, I'll consider taking your offer.
Isn't even the re-write going to suffer the same fate?
4968945
What?
Is there a chance Xavier is going to meet Eris? And also its up to what is best for your story to rewrite as well. as long you don't delete any of or change the characters I'm fine with it
If you are going to rewrite. Can you tell us when is going to happen thank you
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No worries, I'll alert you once I've been working on the rework in Microsoft Word. I do believe I should start sometime tonight or sometime tomorrow.
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Thanks mate
Quick question is the old story going to get deleted or leave it alone
4974451
I'm not sure; I might leave it alone, so can see the changes.
How is the rewrite coming along . is it hard to remake the story?
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I have the first few chapters done but haven't written much more. I've been busy with doing other stuff, but plan to return to it next week or this weekend.
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OK then good luck