I write pony words. Millions of them. Some people actually think they might be worth reading. I am very thankful for that. Also, I have a Patreon now?
To summarize the story TD the Alicorn Princess. The result I got was... interesting.
- Fimfiction story: This story involves Peter Westmoore, a responsible college student, who is transported to the magical land of Equis and transformed into an alicorn princess named TD. He faces challenges adapting to his new life and ruling his nation.
As many of you well know, I'm a father of three. A four-year-old, a two-year-old, and a one-year-old. It's pretty great. Can be difficult, but overall a pretty big blessing. How my wife takes care of three kids five days a week is beyond me, as I have a hard time taking care of them two days a week when my wife goes off to work.
So yeah...
Yes, I'm calling out for editors again. I want to submit a story to the Cozy Glow contest, and I want to make sure that the story I just wrote for it is good, or "wow, that's a jumbled mess of ideas, far too mean, and the ending is terrible."
Let me know if you'd like to help. Any extra eyes would be highly appreciated.
To mark this as a "sequel" to the original story. So, if you're in the mood for more TD/Comet...
https://www.fimfiction.net/story/515715/the-eventual-daughter-of-a-non-brony
So I'm sure a lot of you have heard about the Aussie preschool show Bluey. It's a show largely aimed at small children that a lot of adults like, too. Even ones without kids. It's... ugh, I can't think of a good parallel for that kind of thing.
So, is it actually that good? I've been watching it with my kids, so I should have a good idea.
I have a new story coming out, and I want it to be exceptional. I have finished it, but not to my liking. Anyone want to be a pre-reader and give me criticism on it? I'd love all the help I could get. It's a dark comedy about a mare with a murder cutie mark.
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Sure I'll take a look.
I'm down to help!
Miss Fletcher, the world's most devious mass murderer, who has literally framed *hundreds* for her crimes.
I wouldn't mind helping you out.
Considering you pre-read my stuff, I’m willing to return the favor.
I'd be more than willing to help, if you will have my aid. The premise of the story does sound very intriguing.
I’d be happy to repay the favors i owe you for prereading me
What’s the story?
If you still need help, I'd be willing.
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Erm... A story about a mare with a murder cutie mark.
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i can dig it :)