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The Crazed Werewolf


Lets see where this goes. The stories that i write are the kind of stories i like to read and are the kind of randomness that fills my head. I write primarily for my own satisfaction.

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  • 134 weeks
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  • 138 weeks
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  • 149 weeks
    Sorry to cancel this one.

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  • 181 weeks
    Updates

    Sorry about the lack of updates this past week. I was in the process of moving when I was hospitalized with a bacterial blood infection. I'm not home yet, but I am on two antibiotics and I'm getting plenty of rest.

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Oct
19th
2018

Stupid writes block · 2:36pm Oct 19th, 2018

I could use some help writing the next chapter of Sirens of the Night II. I'm in the process writing the Basketball scene and during the scene I have an encounter between Gilda and Aria that leads up to the final confrontation between them in the next chapter. I am not happy with what I have written so far and I would like some help.

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If you let me know what you currently have I'd be happy to offer suggestions

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Here is what stumped me;

The rest of the day passed quickly, though throughout lunch Gilda had been glaring angrily towards Aria. Aria for her part chose to ignore Gilda, at least she was able to ignore her until she ran into her during the basketball game against Crystal Prep.

"Smoking in the girls room," Aria said looking at Gilda and Lightning Dust as she washed her hands, "how cliche can you get?" Aria inhaled, "those aren't cigarettes are they."

Lightning Dust only laughed, Gilda however growled at her.

"None of the faculty use this restroom." Lightning Dust explained.

"You gonna stop us Monsters Inc.?" Gilda asked through clinched teeth.

"None of my business," Aria said as she walked out the door.

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Soon after Aria leaves Gilda tells Lightning Dust that if anyone finds out what they were doing she'll get kicked off of all the sports teams so they need to make sure Aria "keeps her mouth shut" and doesn't go squealing to VP Luna (her mom). Just because Aria said she wouldn't get involved doesn't mean she won't snitch, Gilda thinks.
Obviously just an excuse for Gilda to use Lightning Dust to get some payback for Aria embarrassing/insulting her in front of her little sister Gabby and for supposedly siding with Anon-A-Miss.

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Thanks for the ideas, I am planning to have the final confrontation between Aria and Gilda in the next chapter after the one I am currently working on.

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