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A Man Undercover


I’m an Autistic-Conservative-Christian who loves to write, act, paint, and so much more, with so many ideas in my head it’s hard to make them stay put. I also have quite an unusual sense of humor.

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  • Today
    My Movie Review on The Mask (1994)

    Aloha, my friends.

    This is your all-out friendly film, TV show, and episode reporter here with another review.

    Today, I'm gonna give you guys my take of Jim Carrey's "The Mask".

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    4 comments · 14 views
  • Wednesday
    My Movie Review on Big Fat Liar

    Greetings, my good friends.

    This is your friendly film, TV show, and episode reporter once again here with another review.

    And today, I'll be giving you all an analysis on a movie that I believe is perfect to celebrate April Fool's Day with:

    "Big Fat Liar"

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    1 comments · 30 views
  • Monday
    James 4:13-17

    Now listen, you who say, "Today or tomorrow we will go to this or that city, spend a year there, carry on business and make money."

    Why, you do not even know what will happen tomorrow.

    What is your life?

    You are a mist that appears for a little while then vanishes.

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    7 comments · 30 views
  • Sunday
    My Episode Review on Three Pests in a Mess

    Greetings, Kemosabes?

    This is your friendly film, TV show, and episode reporter here with another review.

    Today, for my 29th episode analysis, I'm gonna be giving you guys my take of the Three Stooges's "The Pests in a Mess".

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    2 comments · 24 views
  • Saturday
    My Episode Review on Even as IOU

    Greetings, my friends.

    This is your friendly film, TV show, and episode reporter here with another review.

    Today, for my 28th episode analysis, I'm gonna give you guys my take of the Three Stooges's "Even as IOU".

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    1 comments · 12 views
Oct
18th
2018

My Fanfic Review on “The Pony of Vengeance” · 12:18am Oct 18th, 2018

Yo, what’s up peoples, A Man Undercover here. Today, I will be making my 85th blog post and second fanfic review by reviewing The Pony of Vengeance, written by my good friend, BradyBunch.

TThe Pony Of Vengeance
A mysterious figure, living in shadows, is attacking seemingly random crime leaders and leaving little to no trace. The Mane Six investigate, but they find a secret more startling than what they had ever imagined.
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Here’s the summary of it:

A mysterious figure, living in shadows, is attacking seemingly random crime leaders and leaving little to no trace. The Mane Six investigate, but they find a secret more startling than what they had ever imagined.

Who is the mysterious figure? Is it a vigilante? A rebellious cop? An anarchist? Or is it something even more destructive...a pony bent on revenge?

Admittedly, I didn’t think this was going to be my kind of story. But, when I gave it a shot, it turned out to definitely be worth the read.

The action is great, the narrative is well done (especially in terms of making things visual), and the characters are extremely well-developed. The characters that I particularly thought stood out the most when it came to excellent character development and conflict were Ironheart, Twilight, and Rainbow Dash.

But, the most particularly interesting part comes with what the story is about, and what it addresses, such as the fact that a lot of times, it seems that the evil of the world gets off scot free while all the good of the world takes the brunt. I think it would be better explained if you take a look at the story.

My only problems really come from the excessive amount of violence and gore the story had. There were things about it that didn’t sit well for me to be honest, such as brain-juice pouring out of your head, heads getting chopped off, and blood spilling everywhere. But hey, that’s partly because I have preferences that what I mentioned isn’t a part of.

All in all, this story is a masterpiece in its own right. It’s action-packed, full of tons of thrills, mystery, and drama, and has a side dish of humor from Pinkie Pie.

So, I rate “The Pony of Vengeance” a solid 4 1/2 out of five stars. The rating is mostly because of the large tone of violence and gore, but again, those things just aren’t my preferences. Don’t let my opinion on that part stop you from having a look.

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Comments ( 2 )

That definitely sounds like a great story. I will probably read it eventually, but it looks long, and I have a lot of other stories to read, so I might not read for a while.

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Lemme tell you, fam. It's worth the read. It'll getcha hooked from the first chapter, and it'll only get better and better. I spent a lotta time writing it and fleshing it out better than other fanfics.

(Waits for a moment, then laughs.) Pardon the fam, dude. Lingo is confusing.

Also, Man Undercover: YISSSSS!

I love how you addressed this and the way you made me look like a professional. (I'm not XD)

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