My Fanfic Review on “The Pony of Vengeance” · 12:18am Oct 18th, 2018
Yo, what’s up peoples, A Man Undercover here. Today, I will be making my 85th blog post and second fanfic review by reviewing The Pony of Vengeance, written by my good friend, BradyBunch.
Here’s the summary of it:
A mysterious figure, living in shadows, is attacking seemingly random crime leaders and leaving little to no trace. The Mane Six investigate, but they find a secret more startling than what they had ever imagined.
Who is the mysterious figure? Is it a vigilante? A rebellious cop? An anarchist? Or is it something even more destructive...a pony bent on revenge?
Admittedly, I didn’t think this was going to be my kind of story. But, when I gave it a shot, it turned out to definitely be worth the read.
The action is great, the narrative is well done (especially in terms of making things visual), and the characters are extremely well-developed. The characters that I particularly thought stood out the most when it came to excellent character development and conflict were Ironheart, Twilight, and Rainbow Dash.
But, the most particularly interesting part comes with what the story is about, and what it addresses, such as the fact that a lot of times, it seems that the evil of the world gets off scot free while all the good of the world takes the brunt. I think it would be better explained if you take a look at the story.
My only problems really come from the excessive amount of violence and gore the story had. There were things about it that didn’t sit well for me to be honest, such as brain-juice pouring out of your head, heads getting chopped off, and blood spilling everywhere. But hey, that’s partly because I have preferences that what I mentioned isn’t a part of.
All in all, this story is a masterpiece in its own right. It’s action-packed, full of tons of thrills, mystery, and drama, and has a side dish of humor from Pinkie Pie.
So, I rate “The Pony of Vengeance” a solid 4 1/2 out of five stars. The rating is mostly because of the large tone of violence and gore, but again, those things just aren’t my preferences. Don’t let my opinion on that part stop you from having a look.
That definitely sounds like a great story. I will probably read it eventually, but it looks long, and I have a lot of other stories to read, so I might not read for a while.
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Lemme tell you, fam. It's worth the read. It'll getcha hooked from the first chapter, and it'll only get better and better. I spent a lotta time writing it and fleshing it out better than other fanfics.
(Waits for a moment, then laughs.) Pardon the fam, dude. Lingo is confusing.
Also, Man Undercover: YISSSSS!
I love how you addressed this and the way you made me look like a professional. (I'm not XD)