A new chapter... And other news about “The School for the Mindless”. · 8:56pm Oct 9th, 2018
Hey guys, Benny here. I know, you’re are probably only here because of the title. And I’ll get to that. I am very happy to say that The School for the Mindless has been a great story for some of you guys. So, I’m going to say something before I forget it forever.
To point out the facts: I have been noted numerous times that the first chapter seemed a bit too rushed. I’m just going to point this out now, I will, and I won’t repeat this, NOT be changing Chapter 1. The reasons are because...
- It’s my first original story, and I put a lot of time and effort into it.
- To not release things that are for future chapters
- Plot convince
Now for the preview:
(December 24th 2017)
The tree lit up with lights as Benny sat down on his navy blue couch. In his left hand, was a glass bottle of peach tea, and in his right, was a picture of him and a girl. The girl had brown hair, pale skin, olive green eyes, and cat ears (in place of the human ears). She was in a pink dress at the time the photo was taken. Benny had a purple t-shirt, black shorts, and a pair of sunglasses. Seeing the photo made him cry, as it was a memory of the time he had spent with her. He started at the photo for 30 minutes, before placing it on the table. Afterwards, he threw the bottle on the ground, leaving shards of glass on the floor, and tea flowing on the floor. He cried, yelling in the process, on top of his lungs, “Why!?! WHY DID YOU TAKE HER FROM ME”
The School for the Mindless
Chapter 2
Coming soon...
So yeah, what do you think is happening in this preview? Let me know in the comments. Until we meet again, I’m Benny. See ya later.
Cool cant wait ^^